Unit 2- Reflection

LinkedIn

The process of creating a LinkedIn profile was relatively easy, this surprised me! I am not technologically proficient, but eager and excited at what I’ve learned so far! I’m feeling more comfortable using the various technologies introduced in this class. I had started a LinkedIn profile a few years ago, but never fully appreciated its value. LinkedIn is a unique business social network that focuses only on professionals and can be a valuable communication tool if used efficiently. The exercise on top ten best practices on proper LinkedIn usage was so important. In researching for this assignment, I now understand the importance of an accurate and professional looking profile. LinkedIn profiles with mistakes can be counter-productive and even damage an individual’s credibility. Establishing connections within my profession will be valuable in networking and for potential career opportunities.

Preparing report proposal and outline

While brainstorming for my report proposal, I wanted to focus on a real-life current problem in the dental practice where I am employed. I wanted to address an issue that if resolved would benefit the dentist/ owner, the practice, the patient’s, staff, and the environment. I’m concerned that maybe I have taken on a problem that is too big? While creating the outline, I started to realize how much research I would actually have to complete, in order to deliver a comprehensive report. However, I think that implementing digital radiography has many advantages, and is a subject that is worthy of exploring.

Peer review

In reviewing my partner’s proposal, I recognize that her sentence structures are strong. She provides all the necessary information in a way that is clear and easy-to-read. I’m now looking at my own work with a more critical eye. I’ve noticed some of my writing is redundant, this is an area I’m going to continue to work through. Another advantage of being the reviewer is going through the assignment requirements again. I can reflect on my own work, and troubleshoot as to what aspects of my assignment could be improved upon.

My peer evaluator has provided me with excellent suggestions in a professional and friendly manner. I appreciate her strong attention to detail.

Peer review for the proposal

revised report proposal-Josy Jonas-ENGL301-june26,2017

Assignment 1.3 required that we write an informational document that defined a relatively complex term related to our professions. I chose to define a common condition and term that I use almost daily as a dental hygienist, bruxism (clenching and/or grinding) one’s teeth. My goal in the original writing was to focus on writing a document that was reader-centered and to provide enough detail while considering a nontechnical audience. I found writing without the use of dental jargon a little challenging initially. I wanted to present the definitions in a brief and concise manner, while still providing all the necessary information.  I re-wrote the expanded definition several times. I kept wondering if I was placing the right emphasis on the necessary information in a way that would be easy to understand.

The peer review process was the most challenging aspect of the assignment. I followed the peer review guidelines in our textbook as well as the provided handout. These resources were helpful in guiding me in providing feedback that was both helpful and constructive. I wanted to provide feedback that highlighted the many positive areas of my peer’s assignment before making suggestions for improvement. I read my peer’s definitions several times, leaving it for some time, then returning to it. I tried to look at the document in its entirety, before breaking it down into smaller sections. My peer’s definitions were well presented, I provided specific recommendations of where small revisions could be made.

Receiving feedback from a peer was valuable and I applied the changes to my assignment. The feedback had a positive tone and felt constructive. My peer reviewer offered some great suggestions on the flow of some of my sentences, and organization of the expanded definitions. She gave me specific references as to which areas needed improvement, I really appreciate the time she took to evaluate my assignment.

Click here for my peer review.

revised definitions 1.3- Josy Jonas