I am going to tell you a story. “I’ve heard this story many times, and each time someone tells the story, it changes. Sometimes the change is simply in the voice of the storyteller. Sometimes the change is in the details. Sometimes in the order of events. Other times it’s the dialogue or the response of the audience.” (King 1). This is the story of how evil came to exist in the world.
Long before the development of civilization as we know it now, existed a more reduced form, albeit more advanced in terms of societal order than one might expect. This primitive form of human civilization was organized in a short string of small communities, in which the people lived long lives in peaceful harmony. Each child was born knowing nothing of true conflict or its consequences, as they were raised to want for nothing and work equally amongst their peers. Often the children would wonder about the nearby communities, and eventually take long walks to visit them once they were old enough. However, these towns were very similar, and the people would always return.
Thus, it was not surprising at all when a young man began to wonder what existed beyond the borders of his seemingly mundane community. He set out one day, in search of new experiences in the other towns.
When he reached the community closest to his own, he felt as though he had hardly left. He wandered the streets until he came across a small marketplace. A merchant called him over to his stand, where an array of colourful potions lay in vials.
“Will any of these make me feel different?” The young man asked, and the merchant handed an orange potion to him. After drinking the potion, the young mans stomach began to churn and his skin began to crawl. “I do not like this feeling.”
The merchant handed him another potion, an antidote that immediately caused the churning stomach and crawling skin to disappear. The young man thanked the merchant for the odd experience, and began to continue his walk to the next town.
When he reached the next community, he again noticed that it was hardly different at all from his own. He explored the seemingly familiar streets until he came across another marketplace. A merchant called him over, where a table of colourful mushrooms sat on display.
“Will any of these make me feel different?” The young man asked again, and the merchant handed him a purple mushroom. After eating it, the young man began to hallucinate, seeing shadowy figures and darkness everywhere he looked. “I do not like this feeling.”
The merchant told him to wait a moment, for the mushroom to digest. Shortly after, the hallucinations subsided entirely. The young man thanked the merchant for the strange visions, and began to walk to the next town.
Just outside of the next community, he came across another wanderer. She was wearing a dark hooded cloak, and pulled the hood from over her face as she greeted the young man. She asked how his walk through the communities had been, and he explained his desire to experience new things despite how everything was the same. She offered to tell him a story, but warned him of its peculiarity.
“I have already experienced some strange things today, I assure you I can handle it.” He insisted, and so she began her story.
She told him a story of darkness, in which shadowy figures take on the faces of both humans and creatures and act against the goodness of his familiar world. It was a story of violence, corruption, and betrayal like he had never known. The young man began to imagine the shadowy figures all around him, and his skin began to crawl as his stomach churned.
“I do not like this feeling.” He said to her, and waited for her to intervene or for it to go away. “But, of course, it was too late. For once a story is told, it cannot be called back. Once told, it is loose in the world”. (King 11).
Reflection
As I was creating this modified version of Lelsie Silko’s story about how evil came into the world, I found it useful to consider the structure of stories that I have engaged with throughout my entire life, such as those of childrens’ movies and fairy tales. These were the forms through which I was provided digestible lessons of history and morality in my youth, so I thought it was helpful to consider the rules of great story telling as told by Pixar. I also wanted to create this story in a way that resembled that of a folk-tale, so I integrated storytelling techniques of the monomyth and mountain structure.
As I told the story to different people, I found that the “reader” response varied considerably depending on who was listening. When I told the story to my roommate, she interpreted it in a fairly philosophical manner and discussed with me the danger that oblivion poses despite its apparent benefits. Conversely, when I told it story to my Mom, she interpreted as a simple curiosity-killed-the-cat story. I found this interesting because they both made sense of the ending of the story similarly, recognizing the irreversible nature of telling a story. However, they drew different conclusions from this fact, with one preferring some stories to remain untold while the other saw a power in total knowledge. This helped me to recognize the power that storytelling really has on continuing discussions of culture and tradition in terms of moral character, as this simple story stimulated two significant conversations regarding the eternal and irreversible nature of knowledge through stories.
Works Cited
King, Thomas. The Truth About Stories: A Native Narrative. Peterbough: Anansi Press. 2003. Print.
Peters, Brian. “6 Rules of Great Storytelling (As Told by Pixar).” Medium. 21 Mar. 2018. Web. https://medium.com/@Brian_G_Peters/6-rules-of-great-storytelling-as-told-by-pixar-fcc6ae225f50. 23 Jan. 2020.
“8 Classic Storytelling Techniques for Engaging Presentations.” Sparkol. 30 March 2018. Web. https://www.sparkol.com/en/blog/8-classic-storytelling-techniques-for-engaging-presentations. 23 Jan. 2020.
JacobKosh
January 25, 2020 — 1:43 pm
Hi Lilly! This is such a great story – it was fun to read! I think you accomplished telling a classic cautionary tale, with the traveller’s experiences coming in a set of three and a certain air of mysticism. It was also a good length, as if it could be told at bedtime to warn children of being too curious and getting in trouble for it. I think you flawlessly accomplished writing a classic fairytale.
I think the varying interpretations of your audience speaks to the universality of the story, as mentioned in the “6 Rules of Great Storytelling” article you posted. Why do you think universality is important to storytelling, and which other aspects of Pixar’s rules for great storytelling do you find most important?
LillyMclellan
January 25, 2020 — 2:20 pm
Hi Jacob! Thank you so much, I really appreciate that! I believe that universality is incredibly important in storytelling because it really is the foundation of sharing with one another. If a story and the lessons learned from it cannot extend beyond ones own personal condition, then it is not likely to be effective or even interesting to anyone beyond a few close friends and family. By creating something that builds upon a historical or moral lesson that can be interpreted and appreciated by all, you are able to create a captivating and effective story.
I also think that another important aspect of Pixar’s breakdown is keeping a story like this simple and focussed. While I do love to read a complex novel on occasion, it can be very easy to lose myself in an overly-complicated plot when I am reading or listening to a short story. To deliver these as intended so that they may be received and interpreted by the author/speaker, stories should be concise and purposeful.
Looking forward to the semester with you!
ArianneRobbins
January 26, 2020 — 7:00 pm
Hey Lilly!
Wow, what a tale! The pacing and build up lead to a very satisfying and perfectly tied in ending to your story. Your integration of the message in the original story was positively seamless! I love that you used the timeless trope of a person feeling disenchanted with the mundanity of their life, in seek of adventure outside of their boring town.
I’d like to know, has there even been an experience in your life where you stepped outside of your comfort zone and were confronted with something you regretted coming into contact with?
Cheers,
Arianne Robbins
LillyMclellan
January 28, 2020 — 3:39 pm
Hi Arianne, thank you so much for your kind comment! Now that I’m reflecting on how I might answer your question, I am realizing that my experience with coming to UBC draws a lot of parallels with the story that I wrote.
In my last year of high school I had no question in my mind that I wanted to attend UBC or McGill for my undergraduate degree, rather than the smaller university in my hometown (Thompson Rivers University). This is nothing against the school, I was just very ready for a change and to experience somewhere unfamiliar and challenging. Little did I know I was about to go from an honours student to a first year who would hardly make it through two semesters without failing any classes. This was an especially challenging time for me to face and come to terms with, as I’ve known from a very young age that I want to pursue a career in medicine and have always been very driven academically. At times I really regretted my decision to come here, and wondered if I should have waited a year or two before jumping out of my comfort zone like that. But ultimately its the things that make us uncomfortable that help us grow and learn the most!
Looking forward to the semester with you!
NicoleDiaz
January 26, 2020 — 11:49 pm
Hi Lilly!
I gotta say you wrote a very good story! At first I almost got a bit of an Alice in Wonderland type of vibe, and then it shifted in to a story of its own. I liked how it is a cautionary tale of sorts, but still takes the reader on a nice journey from start to finish. I also like how it’s a play on “Curiosity killed the cat” but I would just like to add, the whole quote is “Curiosity killed the cat, but satisfaction brought it back.” In a way its a combination of both your mom and your roommates point of views! Do you think that curiosity is a good thing or does it cause more harm? To add to that, do you think it would be a good or bad thing for everyone to find answers that satisfy what they are curious about?
LillyMclellan
January 28, 2020 — 3:27 pm
Hi Nicole, thank you so much! I recently read Alice in Wonderland again for another class, so I can imagine I may have subconsciously drawn some inspiration from Lewis Carroll’s creative plot line! I personally think that curiosity is a good thing in most cases, though I am probably biased due to it being a major personality trait of mine. I have always been the type of person who needed to know more and get further explanations to satisfy my curiosities. However, I don’t think that is would be an entirely good thing for everyone to get answers to satisfy what they are curious about, as some questions are meant to remain unanswered (at least for the time being).
When you asked me this question, I thought of a genetics course that I previously took in which a specific example of insatiable curiosity posed serious ethical misconduct. We learned about a researcher who recently worked outside of the US governments laws to create genetically edited human embryos. His curiosity in this case was aimed at genetically engineering humans to be born with a resistance to HIV, a goal he pursued despite the experiments extreme lack of ethical consideration. It resulted in the birth of twin girls who are healthy and will hopefully remain so, although the gene editing resulted in their susceptibility to a number of other diseases. Though this is more of a complex case in which curiosity should not necessarily be satisfied, I hope you can understand what I am trying to say!
Looking forward to the semester with you!