That devilish preacher

I thought the speed of the second half of the book quickened immensely from the first half.  I found myself breezing through this frustrating novel.  The devilish almost psychotic preacher Mr. Hackwell kept the pages turning for me.  I was waiting for his grand comeuppance, but there was no act of revenge that was satisfying for me.  Like a villain out of a 1970’s Hanna Barbara cartoon, Mr. Hackwell mischievously worked his scheme on Lola and Mrs. Norval.  I though this was where Maria Amparo Ruiz de Burton excelled in her attempt to capture the reader.  His selfishness and greed was deliciously frustrating. One example of this is towards the end of the novel when Mr. Hackwell starts to slip into psychosis upon the realization that he must have Lola.  “His brain throbbed at the thought that Lola would be taken from him–Lola, that radiant, magnificent creature, to keep whom from marrying Julian, he had plotted, lied, and stolen. He had cherished the thrilling, intoxicating, hope, though with savage spells of rage and wild longings of despair, that she would be his in spite of Julian” (Burton, 252).  Mrs. Burton builds this character up perfectly and impeccably constructed his whole character in no more than paragraph.  In previous chapters he used Lola’s father as a tool to trap Lola into becoming his wife.  By having Lola reluctantly state that she is his wife to numerous witnesses, he caged Lola into a deceitful “marriage.”  This plan perfectly describes Mr. Hackwell as a calm, calculating, self-interested psychopath.

No matter what it takes or who he has to step on, Mr. Hackwell will figure out a way to have his Lola; even against her will.  His ability to assume different personalities around different people to get what he desires, was satisfying and discomforting to me.  Satisfying as in his drive to manipulate the equally greedy Mrs. Norval for his gain.  Discomforting in his awkward pursuit of Lola.

However quick the book felt, the last twenty pages of the book felt rushed and seemed to drag.   Mrs. Burton could have ended her novel in chapter LIX.  The conflict between Hackwell and Julian could have been a logical ending point.  The build up and character development for Julian came to a climax in this chapter.  He had been in obvious pain because of his dismissal from the army and because of his discovery of Mr. Hackwell’s plans of marriage.   I felt an epic duel between the two could have ended the novel on a much more satisfying note for the reader and give Mr. Hackwell his much deserved comeuppance.

Primeros reacciones a “Who Would Have Thought It?”

A mi encuentro este libro interesante por el cinicismo y el sarcasmo del autor en una cuenta muy critica de la sociedad Estadounidense del nordeste. En esta historia de una communidad blanca de Nueva Inglaterra en que una chica Espanola con “piel negro” esta empujada, el autor, Maria Ruiz de Burton, enfoca en la superficialidad de la gente, la ignorancia, la hipocracia, el inequilibrio de poder, el sexismo y el racismo. Ella trata de atacar y exponer a lo que parece como todos los malos que ella percibe en esta sociedad en que vivio por un tiempo. Y a este punto, ella sucede en su meta, aunque sus poderes narrativos estan faltando a veces. Ninguna de sus caracteres son bien desarollados, en especial su personaje supuestamente principal, Lola, la chica “negra,” quien pasa dentro y afuera del narrativo. Cuando esta presente, no habla mucho dialogo o hace mucho accion.

Ya que “Who Would Have Thought It?” esta el primer libro de Ruiz de Burton, tengo que dejar los veredictos en sus habilidades como autor hasta que hube leido sus otros libros, pero a este punto deciria que fuera mejor si ella se queda en el reino de criticismo en lugar de la literatura.

Jon was right.

So I tackled the last 120 pages of this book with trepidation and hope after hearing Jon’s conclusion that the book was dreadfully boring. My hope was in that I would have a different view of ‘boring’ and get more out of the ending than our own personal, omniscient book critic. But soon my hopes were dashed. I had read on, becoming pleasantly enthralled with each turn of the page. Plots of deceit, the little people getting the upper hand, happy endings, and many smiles ensued (I’m pretty easy to please when it comes to reading literature similar to that of Jane Austin). But then, in the height of my amusement, this wonderful ending came grinding to a painful, dull-witted, time-consuming halt, with the final dialogue of those hot-aired Cackles. This, my friends, was a HUGE disappointment. Throughout the entire book I would cringe when I noticed the next chapter would be focusing on the Cackles. Their meddlings in politics and obsession with power made me sick. I am definitely a romanticist by nature, and certainly not a classicist. I know that Ruiz de Burton enjoyed making a show of their hipocritcal actions and the wonderfully clever parody with their namesakes, but what a terrible way to end a perfectly good book. It was similar to a very decent movie about love and plots and good and bad which ends with the movie-goer walking out of the theater, wondering what it was that they just saw. Please, if any of you reading this can explain the symbolism in the final pages 293-298 of the story, I ask you to fill me in as I am afraid that I may have drifted off.

Okay, enough venting. Sorry, I had to get that out. As I mentioned earlier, it made me absolutely giddy to read about the characters most poorly treated in the story receiving the upper-hand. Obviously Lola finally got her happy ending (although whatever happened to Don Felipe Almenara, whose only claim to fame in the novel was his saying he was Lola’s husband, was never quite tied up….I had no doubt that this would be the ultimate crush to Julian and Lola’s love and was disappointed when Don Felipe never appeared again). But others, such as Issac Sprig and Mina the french maid, found that they could climb to the height of their happiness while stepping on a few hipocritical toes along the way! What a lovely balance of good vs. evil! Julian realized the evil hidden within this ‘great government’ which he had served with his very life. Mrs. Norval is almost put away in an insane asylum by the materialistic, cold daughter whom she actually crafted with the looseness of her purse strings. Whatever happened to the poor doctor who started this run-around story is also left to the reader’s imagination. And unappreciated Lavvy…did she ever start a life with Mr. White? I only wish that Ruiz de Burton had filled us in on what eventually happened to THESE characters rather than focusing on the political plans of the nauseating Cackles. Again, if anyone can explain the importance of this last conversation (perhaps pertaining to the Cackles’ [or real people whom they were meant to imitate] involvement in American history [something about which I am terribly ignorant of]), please feel free.

Span 322 – “Who Would Have Thought It?” Blog # 2

Having completed the second half of the book, I now feel that I have a somewhat different set of opinions and thoughts about the novel as a whole, especially when it comes to Ruiz de Burton’s writing style. As I believe we have established in class this is a novel criticizes the aspects of class, race, religion and gender in 18th century American life.

First off, being aware of how highly critical this novel is, let’s ask the important question of; Is this criticism really valid and sufficient? I strongly believe that this is fundamental to the way we judge the aspects of the novel. We must take into consideration who the target audience is. We, being young, generally liberal Canadians in the current time period, now apply very liberal approaches to society as a whole. For example, if you were a Nazi in Germany during the holocaust, you wouldn’t think “I’m such an awful person, what on earth am I doing?” My point being, it is almost certain that if an American, in the 18th century read this novel, it would probably just seem like a sad story with a happy ending. Perhaps he/she would say “Hackwell seems like a fairly dodgy character”

That being said, this novel facilitates a very easy environment for us to judge these New England families over their racist and sexist lives because of the way we currently live ours today. If we examine an example of something which is currently universally accepted, like the fact that same sex marriages are illegal in 48 states. In this case, there is a minority who is critical of this, Canadians and Californians for example, however thinking about whether it will be the same in 100 years, the majority would probably disagree, and say that it will be legal nation wide.

I won’t let this get too lengthy. Overall I found the ending to be slightly dissapointing. I’m assuming I’m not alone in saying that it wasn’t as exciting as we all had hoped for, even though Lola and Julian ended up living happily ever after in Mexico.

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María Amparo Ruiz de Burton’s Who Would Have Thought It? (the first Mexican-American novel in English) is centrally concerned with the notion of “good government”–and its absence from the nineteenth-century USA. Indeed, at some points the problems facing the country seem to be the fault of government per se “If we were to trace our troubles to their veritable source,” the novel’s narrator declares at one point, “we would often reach, more or less directly, their origin in our lawgivers. Not only the dwellers of the frontiers, not only the victims of lawsuits, not only–“ (201).

Here, however, the train of thought is interrupted. The narrator breaks off to declare “But I am no political philosopher. I am wandering away from my humble path” (201). And that path is, ostensibly, a romantic comedy of domesticity and manners.

The narrative opens as the life of the Norvals of New England is transformed when Dr. Norval returns to his family from an expedition to the American Southwest with a young Mexican girl named Lola he has helped to rescue from a band of border Indians. The doughty and upright Mrs Norval is shocked and upset, but the unwelcome arrival is rather sweetened by the fact that the girl brings with her a million dollars’ worth of gold ore and precious stones. Much of this loot has to be kept in trust until Lola comes of age and/or is reunited with her missing father. In the meantime, however, there is plenty that can be appropriated by the family, whose daughters are soon arrayed in the latest fashion and riding out from a New York mansion in the finest carriages. There is even enough money to be spread around family friends and acquaintances, and to outfit entire companies for the Union side when the Civil War breaks out.

The bulk of the novel then charts the ways in which money and warfare expose the frailties and hypocrisies of WASP respectability. The story’s greatest rogue is a lawyer turned preacher turned military man by the name of Mr. Hackwell, who circles the Norvals, their womenfolk, and their money, like a hyena who has sniffed out the stench of moral corruption and is anxious to reap the profits. Hackwell contrives to seduce Mrs Norval into a clandestine marriage once her husband takes off on yet another voyage, while trying to engineer nuptials between her son, Julian, and Hackwell’s own sister, Emma. All the while he lusts after the young Lola, who develops into a striking beauty as she matures, made all the more desirable by the potential dowry that she bears with her.

Rosaura Sánchez and Beatrice Pita point out that money and machinations thereby lead to “the fall of Republican motherhood” (“Introduction” xxviii) and “the violation of the marriage contract” (xxxi). But this is also an allegory of broader social disturbances, just as the arrival of Lola and her wealth points to the US acquisition of over half of Mexico’s mineral-rich territory following the Mexican-American War of 1846 to 1848. As Sánchez and Pita observe, the novel exposes “the degeneration of democratic values and the faltering of the republican ideal” as a whole (xlv). Democracy is a myth, rights are proclaimed only to be abused and ignored, and there is “no informed consent of the governed [. . .] but rather corruption and influence peddling everywhere, even in the highest circles of government” (xlv).

The novel is indeed scathing about the state of the American res publica. Mrs Norval’s sister, Lavinia, travels to Washington to enquire about her brother, Isaac, a prisoner of war in a Southern camp. She discovers, however, that her government is happy to let its citizens languish if it should mean increasing pressure upon the Confederacy’s capacity to feed even its own people. Moreover, Isaac in particular has been removed from any list of prisoners to be exchanged because he once had a run-in with a powerful politician. Private pride (as well as ambition and indifference) is allowed to over-rule any sense of compassion or responsibility.

Lavinia had previously “believed all she had read in printed political speeches” (106); soon, however, she reluctantly comes to share in the cynicism expressed eventually by almost all the novel’s admirable characters. Julian too, for instance, who is threatened with dismissal from the army despite his heroic record, and then studiously ignored when he tries to press his case before the President, soon finds himself learning a “bitter philosophy [. . .] from the leading men of his country” (215).

In short, precisely at the moment at which the United States is forging some of its most potent discourses of self-justification and exceptionalism, from Manifest Destiny to the Empancipation Declaration, Ruiz de Burton reveals their bankruptcy and hypocrisy. Figures such as Mrs Norval may continue to declare that theirs is “the best government on Earth” (67), and to rail against both foreigners and popery; but she is insulated by wealth and blinded by the return of long repressed desires that dance around her, Ruiz de Burton suggests, like “unbottled imps” that have particular and “abundant fun” in Washington (148). As the social contract is revealed to be a sham, any putative hegemony is replaced by the new habits of wealth and the impish antics of misguided desire.

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Segunda parte del libro

Esta parte me parecio mucho mas interesante. Por un lado hay mas descripciones de los indigenas y sus comunidades donde se puede ver las opiniones y las primeras impresiones de cabeza de vaca acerca de estas personas. Adicionalmente hay una comparacion constante entre Cabeza de Vaca y Jesus.

Cabeza de Vaca nos da varios ejemplos de los rituales que los indigenas hacen como el sacrificio de hijos, entierros, resolucion de conflictos con otras tribus y entre miembros de una misma comunidad. En esta parte tambien nos damos cuenta de la espiritualidad de los indigenas. Estas personas son mostradas como seres muy supersticiosos que atibuyen las cosas que no pueden explicar a seres sobrenaturales o milagros.

Cabeza de Vaca se burla de la supersticion de los indigenas pero al mismo tiempo la aprovecha para salvarse. Al final del libro es ironico que Vaca se burle de la ignorancia de los indigenas , porque es exactamente esa ingenuidad lo que es mas valioso de los indigenas para la corona espanola, quien podra catequizar a los indigenas facilmente asi como cabeza de Vaca lo hizo.

El catequismo que hizo cabeza de Vaca es peculiar porque el jamas dio clases a los indigenas sobre Jesus o la religion catolica, en vez de esto se nombro asi mismo mesias y elegido de Dios y comenzo un viacrusis como el de Jesus en el cual curo muchos enfermos y reunio mucha gente y redujo la violencia entre tribus y familias. En otras palabras, cabeza de Vaca se convirtio en el emblema de la cristiandad y trato en varios casos exitosamente demostrar que los cristianos y por tanto la religion catolica tiene muchas cosas que ofrecer a los indigenas.

Cabeza de Vaca se considero asi mismo un elegido de Dios para sobrevivir y llevar un mensaje a la corona inglesa y creo que este mensaje es que los indigenas tienen mentes dociles que pueden facilmente se encaminadas en el camino de Jesus. Tambien cabeza de Vaca produce pistas sobre como tratar a los indigenas en la vida cotidiana y en caso de sublevacion .

Who Would have thought it? II

The novel is getting very interesting and I’m actually excited to know what happens at the end. I have read about 2/3 of the book, and by this point i want to eliminate Mr. Hackwell and Mrs. Norval. Sooooo evilllll!  Mrs.  Norval has all the negative qualities that a woman could possibly have, immoral woman. (p 135) It is funny how Mr.Hackwell is seen as a hero and Mrs. Norval as a noble woman, best mother, best christian. (p 138) The way she treats her sick son is so un-motherly, no love, no affections.

The novel is full of rogues or leech like personalities, that want to associate with one and another to suck each other’s blood. The corruption is present in every chapter, in Chackle’s family, Mr. Hackwell’s relationship with Mrs. Norval, in the government…..
Even though Lavinia does not speak out, she is the only  person who criticizes the society and the government, and through her eyes we better see the corruption.  She is also the only one that speaks about Mrs. Norval’s tyranny and every body’s passiveness towards her, and if Julian was not so sick and if she didn’t love him so dearly she would disobey Mrs. Norval.

I was surprised by Mr. Gunn, ” we came to see the battle from the distance. We thought it would be such a splendid sight. So three or four of us representative, and two or three senators, got together to have some fun coming over to see the fight” p 72
This is very similar to present  American attitude. The politician stir the shit and innocent people have to go fight in battles, and the politicians just watch from far away and find it a “splendid sight”, “fun”. It disgusts  me to the max. I get red and steam comes out of my ears. What’s fun about people fighting? It reminds me of hockey games which i find ridiculous how people start cheering when players start fighting, or when i first moved to Canada i couldn’t believe students had fun going to watch fights after school.
The best word to describe the Cackle family is “gente de malaleche”. They are very competitive and  also typical Americans that ” Never undertake to lift a fallen man; never associate your fortunes with an unlucky dog like Isaac” p 75.
Who would have thought it? is probably not a feminist novel but chapters 24-30 continuously deal with feminist issues, and the importance of woman in the country , Lavinia’s patriotism  and how women are devalued in the society.  The reader can feel the frustration and pain that Lavinia experiences. In  Chapter  26 the way Mr. Blower speaks to Lavinia makes me scream, ” I see you don’t grasp the idea. Of course, ladies can’t well grasp great ideas, or understand the reasons that impel men in power to act at times in a manner apparently contrary to humanity, to mercy, to justice. …” (p 114)     The novel sees no democracy in practice. democracy is represented as a “myth for public consumption and not a reality”. (P xiv)  There is widespread corruption, even in the highest circle of government. Economic success and profit are  more important  than support for individual political freedom and equality.
I’m excited to know what happens to Julian and Emma’s case and whether Mr. Norval comes back or not.

Hola!

My name is Delara and I’m a 4th year, Spanish and Geography major. Both fields fascinate me and I’m planning to do a masters in Hispanic Studies. This is my last semester at UBC and I’m happy to be in such a nice class.

Who Would have thought it?

The novel is an easy read, and I’m enjoying it. There is a lot of drama, which makes it’s fun, but at the same time it points out crucial  gender, class, and race issues, and shows how they are all interconnected.

I see a lot of parallelism in Mrs, Norval and the United States and Lola and Mexico. Mrs Norval symbolizes the greed of US and Lola like Mexico is defenseless.  In the first few chapter the racial issues really stand out. We are familiarized with the American attitude towards non-Americans specially, blacks, natives and Europeans. Within one family like Dr. Norval’s points of views can vary. In the case of Dr. Norval’s family, Mattie and Dr. Norval have less detest in foreigners, and Mrs. Norval the most. Doña Theresa also views the Indians as savages, and she is Mexican, “Thank god, Lolita is away from those horrid savages” P36. I think Doña Theresa’s request to baptize Lola is very significant. “please do not forget that she must be baptized and brought up Roman Catholic” It is important because she differentiates “civilized” and “barbarians”, and religion being very crucial to being civilized. Pointing out Roman Catholic, also highlights the religious division in the society and it’s importance , which we will see later chapters being dedicated mainly to religious practices and a person’s right and freedom to choose one’s religion , ie. Chapter 15.
We can also see how nosy neighbors and friends are during that time. They monitor and report every one’s act. They try to find out the latest news, and socialize with one another to find out the secrets of each others lives. The greed and competition really stands out. The importance of dressing well, accessories and jewelries related with class and status. Ruth’s conversation with her aunt demonstrates women’s preoccupation’s during that time.  Women’s goal was to look appropriate and to find a good match, marrying for love or marring for money and status. I could feel a great frustration and desperation from Ruth, Laviana and Mr. Hackwell’s sister.
In the begining Mr. Hammerhard’s and Hackewell’s wives seemed lucky to be married and to have babies. Mr. Hammerhard’s and Hackwell’s conversation in chapter 9 really disgusts me. The way they felt towards their wives, and their reason for marrying them, and how they are constantly planning to make some money by using some one. Chapter 9 is one of the chapters in the beginning where I was awakened by the evilness and corruption of the country; Mr. Hackwell’s plan to fool Mrs. Norval as her pastor.

The Big Pink Book

So far I am enjoying this book, it is far less scary than I thought it was going to be.  The characters and their reactions were human.  I had some troubles getting used to the syntax and other grammatical aspects of the book, but have found the story of the Norval’s and Lolita intriguing and am looking forward to finishing the novel.   the universalism of the novel is very evident – the importance of money and status (although no one really wants to admit it) are themes that can easily be translated into modern times.  I particularly enjoyed the introductory speech made by Hackwell and his discussion with Hammerhard regarding the necessity of ‘rogues’ in ‘good society’.  Also, I enjoyed the affection shown towards Lolita from Dr. Norval and his description of how he came to find her and her mother; how she had more romance in her short life than in any trashy novel that his daughters or wife had read.