To: Karn Sangha
From: Alicia DeGelder
Date: February 12 2019
Subject: LinkedIn Peer Review
Per assignment 2:2 instructions, I have reviewed your LinkedIn profile and found it to be very professional. I have highlighted my thoughts and suggestions, as follows, and have included my pdf rubric below. I hope you find my suggestions helpful.
Cover Photo: The default picture is nice, but adding a personlized banner photo may add some uniqueness.
Personal Photo: Great professional-looking photo that makes a good first impression.
Heading: Adding a little more detail in the headline, such as specialties or specific skills, may make help it stand out. A little extra detail can draw attention to your page and attract potential employers.
Summary: Great positive attitude (i.e. use of “awesome”) and good idea to include an email address so people can easily communicate (can this be hyperlinked?). Consider adding a few more personal details.
Experience: I suggest providing some more details of your experiences/achievements in these positions. Details or key words can help potential employers find people with the skills/experience they are looking for.
Skills/Experiences: Looks great, there are lot of skills listed!
Best regards,
Alicia DeGelder
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