MEMO
TO: Razvan Nesiu
FROM: Mahsa Ehtemam
DATE: February 16 2019
SUBJECT: Peer Review of Your LinkedIn Profile
In accordance with the English 301 assignment 2.2, I have created a LinkedIn Peer Review Template and evaluated your profile. Upon researching the best practises for using LinkedIn I have created a guideline and have made suggestions for your profile. The template is enclosed below, and the filled out form has been sent to your email directly.
Please let me know if you have any questions, and your feedback is greatly appreciated.
LINKEDIN PEER REVIEW
Name: Razvan Nesiu
URL: https://www.linkedin.com/in/razvan-nesiu-327105ab/
OVERALL VISUAL
| Initial impression
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Organized and clean overall, but a lack of consistency in text formatting across categories. |
| Quality and Professionalism of Profile Photo
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Appropriate and professional outfit. A higher quality, closer head shot may be more appropriate for LinkedIn. |
| Required categories included and filled out | Relevant categories included and filled out to most extent. Some categories look sparse – considering adding more details. Consider adding an “Interests” category to make your profile more personable. |
HEADLINE AND SUMMARY
| Objections and relevant skills
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There is no headline/summary. This should be added to give others a sense of what your goal is and what you hope to achieve from this platform. |
| Personable and professional
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See above. |
EXPERIENCE
| Up to date | Up to date with dates clearly outlined. Considering adding details in your volunteer section or work in other areas to add variety to your profile.
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| Related to summary
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Summary not present. |
| Concise, easy to follow, relevant details
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Consider using bullet form to highlight main points and make it easy for the reader. Adding more details across your experiences can be beneficial as well. |
EDUCATION
| Up to date
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Up to date with dates clearly outlined |
| Details about degree and major
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Sufficient information. Consider adding your GPA if it is competitive. |
| Extracurriculars and awards
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Include relevant clubs, events, activities and organizations. Employers like to see involvement. |
SKILLS
| Relevant hard and soft skills
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A long collection of relevant hard skills related to your line of work. Consider adding soft skills to your profile. |
| Endorsed by others
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Yes, many of your skills have been endorsed which adds legitimacy to your profile. |
OTHER
| Grammar/Spelling | No spelling or grammar errors. Consider writing details of your experience with bullet points and keep a consistent and professional writing style
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| Contact details
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Add alternative contact methods besides messaging on LinkedIn. |
| Online presence and involvement | Good involvement of groups and interests on LinkedIn. |
Enclosure:
ENG301.Linkedin-Template-Mahsa-Ehtemam
301.Linkedin-Peer-review-by-Mahsa-Ehtemam
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