To: Alicia DeGelder
From: Karn Sangha
Date: 6 March 2019
Subject: Review of You Attitude memo to Evan Crisp
I have reviewed your memo to Evan Crip regarding successful email communication. Below is my feedback and expanded review for each section of the memo.
Introduction
The introduction was well written without talking down to the reader. It was written in a respectful tone that leads the reader towards not being hurt regarding their writing skills.
Tips
This section was quick to the point with out any use of pronouns. The tips were easy to understand. Well written section.
Conclusion
The conclusion was well written again with a respectful tone. The only issue was that you could’ve added a contact email where the reader can reach you if they have any further question. Overall really well written memo to the reader.
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