Peer Review of Mahsa’s You Attitude Assignment

To:                 Mahsa Ehtemam
From:            Razvan Nesiu
Date:              March 6, 2019
Subject:         Peer Review of You Attitude Assignment

The memorandum you have written highlights key points about writing an email professionally with a You Attitude.

Introduction

• The introduction is a bit succinct but it is doing a good job of explaining the assignment to the reader.

Writing Style

• The unordered list contains the main points of improvement for Evan Crisp.
• The intro and the conclusion are expressive.

You-Attitude

• You could have included as a writing tip the avoidance of imperatives
• You could have used more examples to emphasize key points better

Grammar

• The grammar used was good.

Conclusion

Consider adding more examples to make your tips easier to understand. Other than that, your memo is very well written. If you have any concerns, please do not hesitate to contact me via email or facebook.