Avoid the negative.
Example:
NEGATIVE:
“The Arts Connection while maintains a high standard for their staff and students, many problems have risen, specifically during morning care, due to lack of overall structure and poor staff training. Staff being unprepared for the day-to-day as well as loose rules for the staff themselves has caused a lack of supervision for the children and many licensing codes being violated. Due to the strict rules made by licensing, at any time a licensing officer can come and review the state of the morning care and could potentially cost Arts Connection their childcare license.”
RE-Write in the POSITIVE : While the Arts Connection maintains a high standard for their staff and students, the overall structure of the morning care routine and staff training will benefit from an increase in staff preparation and improved policies for supervision. This will ensure that licensing codes are maintained, and the highest level of care and supervision of students is achieved.
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