To: Madie Leroux
From: Jasmin Senghera
Date: Feb 12th, 2019
Subject: Peer Review of LinkedIn Page
First Impressions: Based on an initial glance your profile is quite outstanding. All the components of a LinkedIn page are present and there appears to be a description for all the experiences. The only details that stand out are the lack of a header image.
Visuals: The profile picture chosen is appropriate for LinkedIn and is in good quality. My only recommendation is to add a header image. While, there isn’t a solid guideline on what this image should be, I suggest using an image of where you reside.
Contact Information: The contact information provided is very notable as it includes a website showcasing your fashion portfolio. This is a very innovative idea. However, the details of this website could be moved to the projects section under accomplishments. Subsequently, an email address could be added to your contacts to allow for easier communication.
Headline & Summary: The headline provided is short and to the point which is appreciated. Additionally, the summary incorporates both your skills and interests thereby complementing the profile.
Experience: The experiences provided are very commendable. Adequate details are provided, and each experience is organized chronologically. All in all, it is very easy to read and understand.
Skills: The skills stated all appear to be relevant. The presence of endorsements is very notable. To contribute to these skills, time management could be added based on your experiences as a fashion show producer and designer.
Interests: The interests presented on the page all appear to reflect your experiences. They portray enthusiasm for both computer science and fashion.
Organization & Grammar: There are not any grammatical issues throughout the page. Overall, the flow of it is very appealing to the reader. In terms of consistency, you could ensure that for the work experience section you use bullet points for describing the experiences to match those in the volunteer experience section.
Concluding Comments: In conclusion your LinkedIn page is very strong and will definitely appeal to employers. The readability and interests especially enhance the page. The suggestions I have are:
- Include a header image
- Use bullet points for consistency
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