To: Russel Gerbrandt
From: Alicia DeGelder
Date: March 17, 2019
Subject: Peer review of draft formal report: Deriving Stock Market Sentiment with Natural Language Processing
Thank you for submitting your draft report, please see below for my thoughts and recommendations.
Title Page:
The title page is properly formatted and professional looking, well done.
Table of Contents:
The topics are clearly listed.
As the document will be quite large, I suggest adding page numbers to help your reader find the appropriate section quickly.
Introduction:
Your layout is very simple to follow, I appreciate that you have it sectioned off accordingly.
I suggest eliminating section a) Audience in the final report as it is written for your audience and does not need to be highlighted here.
If your audience is a professional in the stock market field, perhaps he is already familiar with the term “market sentiment” and section d) could be removed from the document. If your reader is familiar with the information, including it may be superfluous.
Figures:
Thank you for including figures in your report, it is helpful to have a visual. I suggest including a descriptive legend with the figures in the final draft to help explain the figures.
I hope you have found my suggestions useful in finalizing your report. Please feel free to contact me if you require any clarification.
Thank you.
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