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Essay exemplar

Essay exemplar

Jordan wants to have a nice, long summer at the end of seventh grade; her persuasive essay makes that quite evident with several points that support her opinion through the use of statistics, comparison, and expert testimony.

 

Summer: 15 Days or 2 1/2 Months?

The final bell rings. It’s the last day of school, and summer has finally come! Students don’t have to think about school for at least another 2 1/2 months. That is the way it should always be. Schools should continue using the traditional calendar and not a year-round schedule. There are numerous downsides to year-round schooling. It has no positive effects on education, it adds to costs, and it disrupts the long-awaited summer vacation.

Contrary to the well-accepted belief, year-round schooling has no constructive impact on education. Most year-round schedules use the 45-15 method: 45 days of school followed by 15 days off. Because of this, there are many first and last days of school. All those transitions disrupt the learning process. Also, there is no evidence of higher test scores. Due to that, many schools that change to year-round schedules end up switching back. For example, since 1980, 95 percent of schools that tried the year-round schedule changed back to a traditional calendar. It is obvious that changing to year-round schooling does not help students; therefore, why is the change necessary?

Like any other facility, keeping a school open requires a great deal of money. When a school changes to a year-round schedule, the costs skyrocket. Keeping school open in the middle of summer requires air conditioning, and that adds significantly to the school’s expenses. The usual utility bills grow because of the additional open-school time. Finally, teachers must be paid for all the weeks they are working. With all these factors, the cost of keeping schools open becomes immensely high. For example, a high school in Arizona had a cost increase of $157,000 when they switched to year-round schooling. Some schools may not be able to handle such increases, and other schools that can handle these expenses could be doing better things with the money. Is year-round school really where the money should go?

An important part of a child’s life is summertime. With year-round schedules, students would hardly have any time to relax. During the 15-day breaks, they would be thinking about their quick return to school. It would also be difficult to coordinate family vacations with parents’ work schedules. Similarly, children would not be able to go to most summer camps. One expert, Dr. Peter Scales, says, “The biggest plus of camp is that camps help young people discover and explore their talents, interests, and values. Most schools don’t satisfy all these needs. Kids who have these kinds of [camp] experiences end up being healthier and have fewer problems.” Obviously, the summer is crucial to a child’s learning and development. Why should this invaluable part of a young person’s life be taken away?

It is evident that year-round schooling is not the best option for the school calendar. There is absolutely nothing wrong with the traditional school year. Why change something that works so well? The final bell rings. Let’s make sure this bell means that the “real” summer vacation has come.

Review: Memoirs of a Secret Empire

Hi Hum 8,

I have received “3 big ideas” from some of you. This is a good to building on the assignment for today:

REVIEW AssignmentWrite a film review on Japan: Memoirs of a Secret Empire, which addressses the following questions:1) How did this video supplement your understanding and research on the Edo period to date?

2) Out of reading, viewing, and writing, which medium do you find enhances memory and understanding of a history the most effectively for you?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4_sPai3Ajbc

Today’s Missions

Day 4 – Thur. Feb .12

Time Subject Class Plan Notes
9:28-10:16 HUM 7-1 Gr 7 – 2 missions: decide on which blocks to use to1) Complete the Creative Essay Redux – we will show our work in class on Friday

2)Meet in CPR/ News groups for check-in.CPR – When is the railroad going up? What will it look like? Will it be within our classroom or outside in the halls of the school? If it will be a school exhibit. Please send me an update today.News – how many articles are ready for the first publication? Please send me an update today.

EXTENSION: Balderdashers – Brant / TeeganTomorrow: Ch 6 overview / Ch 7 Lower Canada Rebellions

NEW ASSIGNMENT – Ch 5 & 6 Timeline pointsChoose 2 timeline topics, one per chapter. One must be something you have NOT written on yet. Read your peers’ paragraph on the subject to refresh your memory, and gain insight to help your timeline point shine. You should be able to draft at least 1 timeline point today.

Due: next Thursday

OTHER ASSIGNMENTS

Essay drafts returned tomorrow (Friday). Corrections /REVISED ESSAY DUE: Wed. Feb. 18

Students with extensions must send an email with their expected draft/final due dates by Friday for approval.

10:16-10:31 Recess
10:31-11:18 HUM 8 PBS – Finish Memoirs of a Secret EmpireTech deputy- ISHAN to scene select 

REVIEW Assignment

Write a film review on Memoirs of a Secret Empire, which includes an answer to the following questions

:1) How did this video supplement your understanding and research on the Edo period to date?

2) Out of reading, viewing, and writing, which medium to find enhances memory and understanding of a history the most effectively for you?

EXTENSIONBalderdashers: Matthew and Mikaili

ASSIGNMENTS 5 Rings Final has been moved to Tuesday as your drafts will be returned Friday for corrections.Friday is tea ceremony during Math. (11:18-12:05) Math 9 students have already been excused to be able to attend.Scroll assembly is on Tuesday, so bring any and all of your materials to put it together. This may carry over until Wed if more assembly time is needed. On Wed I would like to have a gallery walk of our scrolls! 🙂
11:18-12:05 Math 8 Dialogue group should proceed with cupcake scenario and build in ratio/rate/percent concepts.

Storyboard group should create characters a bit more.First proposal needs to be simplified by the storyboard group and create the ideas for the concepts to come into the scenarios for the dialogue group to draft.

Next report to class: Tuesday 11:30am.

Design group should design 1 character draft each to report Tuesday. They do not have to be human.

There are 3 groups:Storyboard / Organization teamDialogue / Equation groupDesign / Drawing group
12:05-12:50 Lunch  Garrett to put on the Princess Bride @ Machine scene  Magic Tourney starts next Thurs. We need a round robin/playoff map posted in class or outside to keep track. The winner will face Mr. Wilde.
12:50-1:33 Math 8A Students will work on Ch. 10 (algebra)Each student picks 1 question per section to show to each other. After a section is done, they go onto the next and repeat.Andrew can recommend questions to others.Andrew should report to the class his rough research proposal (what it’s about).Alternatively: indy work period:Braeden may study for the volume test tomorrow and work on timeline points with a minimum of 7 sentences.Brant may choose any written work (humanities, investigations, etc) – email point form outlines / big ideas/ subpoints/evidence for both proposals by end of school day (can overlay into DiDe if platforms are evaluated & anchor platform chosen/developed).

Jett can look on Hum 7 assignments for make-up assignments & work on DiDe platform comparison. Jett should email me if he wants a package of catch up assignments put together to work on over the weekend. Jett can also ask Nick what he is writing on for True Diary and preview the draft (due Tuesday).

Palak can complete timeline points and preview ch 7 article. Palak should read 1 article of news (per day, ideally) and comment on it in an email.

Andrew can create an outline for his research report, which should include at least 3 key ideas/ people/ events in the history of Math or resurrect Nighthawk Math with Palak.

 

 

1:33-2:16 HUM 7-1 CPR/ News or Art Essay, depends which order they voted for in the morning.
2:16-2:26 Recess
2:26-3:10 Digital Design Deputy: Evan VWebcraft cnt’dEveryone is comparing 3 platforms for their anchor/efolio website. Students should finish reviewing a rate all 3, have point form notes published by Thursday, preferably with screenshots, on a site of their choice which is to become an e-foilo, ‘anchor’ site.

The platforms are weebly, wordpress, and blogger.

At 2:55pm – students should have a discussion of what they dis/liked about each site.

Make a 3 column chart on the board so I can see what points were raised tomorrow (or email me a chart).

NEW: They MUST password protect their chosen site.

NEW: Next Thursday is show-and-tell of a digital piece. Prepare a new or old portfolio piece to share in a brief presentation, and explain a bit about the process in making your digital design.This can be linked into your efolio site for ease of access.

Thursday we will look at efolio requirements and construction.

Evan V should interview students individually on their knowledge of code to what they know so far and give me a report in an email. We’ll start with Scratch and I am looking for recommendations/projects for the next step.  Right now I am considering coding in WordPress and indy coding projects.

 

 

M8 Storyboard: Report Wed. Feb. 11

CHAPTER 2 – rates, ratio, proportional reasoning

PLOT DRAFT

  • Seahawks lose a game
  • a fan is angry
  • they go to a cafe and orders a cupcake
  • cupcake tranports him to space with  a better football team (Spacehawks)
  • Meets “try hard” football captain on the moon, named Sherlock Holmes
  • Coach from moon (who is also an astronaut) goes back to Earth & coaches the seahawks

Q on Scrolls

Q: Do we answer the questions in the textbook and the ones that you gave us as a group or individually?

A: That’s a great question. I think the most fair thing to do will be for the group to be given a group mark on thoroughness of all curriculum questions answers listed on the Bushido Hostage Scroll Assignment. The textbook page is a close match to the curriculum questions.

What I do not want is group members to answer the same question several times. Groups should split the questions evenly to make sure everyone has a fair contribution. A peer mark for group contributions will be included at the reflection stage of the project.

Individual writing marks will also be assessed, so please do include your name on your particular writing or creative parts.

If groups have chosen to divide the scrolls in other ways than by splitting up writing, let me know so I may find an appropriate rubric (design, performance, etc).

So, there will be an individual component for contributions, as well as a combined group mark for the overall product.

 

The Absolutely True Diary – Novel Study Assignment

ESSAY TOPICS for the ABSOLUTELY TRUE DIARY OF A PART-TIME INDIAN

Essay Topics absolutely true diary

or Q 1-5, 8 or 11 at the back of the novel.

 

**PLEASE NOTE THE HISTORICAL AND GEOGRAPHICAL USE OF THE WORD “INDIAN” IS ACCEPTABLE ONLY WHEN PEOPLE SELF-IDENTIFY  AS SUCH.

IN CANADA THE WORD HAS FALLEN OUT OF ACCEPTANCE IN FAVOUR OF A PERSON’S NATION, FIRST NATIONS, INUIT OR METIS; ABORIGINAL PEOPLE; AND INDIGENOUS PEOPLE AS REFERRING TO ABORIGINAL PEOPLE OF THE WORLD. “NATIVE” SHOULD BE USED WITH CAUTION AND RESPECT TO THE CONVERSATION.

YOU SHOULD ONLY REFER TO “INDIAN” AS IT IS USED IN A HISTORICAL CONTEXT, WITHIN THE BOOK’S TITLE, OR TO REFER TO THE AUTHOR’S PERSPECTIVE, WHICH IN AMERICA, HAS NOT ADJUSTED.**

Bushido Bibliography

2economics

This website was a good one because it quickly summarized the main points needed for a good paragraph. it did not drag on with irrelevant information.

“Economics mainly developed in Edo, Osaka, and Kyoto. The population grew, Japan increased their trade, more roads and paths were established throughout the country, and a new system of government was established. These changes resulted in a wealth and accomplishment gain.”

http://www.japan-guide.com/e/e2128.html

it is about Japan in isolation

3geography

 

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Edo

this is good because of the map on the site and the various sorces at the bottom
 This is a good link because it tells a story about compassion in a military setting. I think this is cool because now i can include a story in my S.A

4politics

http://www.britannica.com/EBchecked/topic/598326/Tokugawa-period

It talks a lot about the politics of Japan during the Edo Period. It has a lot of other useful information as well.

http://www.japan-guide.com/e/e2128.html

This site has loads of info that you can use
http://www.nakasendoway.com/tokugawa-political-system/

if you search “edo japan politics” and the fifth one down
This link tells us about the politics of Japan, and compares it a little bit to other dynasties. It allows for you to analyze the politics, but it doesn’t help for anything except politics

5social – hierarchy

http://shogun2.heavengames.com/articles/history/the-caste-system-of-feudal-japan/

This website looks promising. It is useful because it provides quite a bit of information on Tokugawa Shogunate. It goes into detail about the social systems that he invented and people’s classes.

http://www.vam.ac.uk/content/articles/t/the-edo-period-in-japanese-history/

This site is good because it is from a Royal Museum and has lots of information and pictures.

The link I sent highlights the Hierarchy of Japan during the Edo period.

 

http://www.vam.ac.uk/content/articles/t/the-edo-period-in-japanese-history/

It talks about the leaders of japan and the social status

6social – isolation – religion

http://www.vam.ac.uk/content/articles/t/the-edo-period-in-japanese-history/

It talks about social structure, the year of isolation and the ending
of isolation. It also provides details about rulers, the edo period
and more!

7the shogunate

 

Link:     http://www.britannica.com/EBchecked/topic/541431/shogunate      via “Encyclopedia Britannica”.

This link is about the shogunate: what it is, and the history of the shogunate in Japan.
This link is a viable resource because it is a detailed and informative source for information about the shogunate, from Encyclopedia Britannica.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shogun

It is a good website because you can click on the footnotes and go to other websites. It also talks about everything within shoguns and shogunates

Difference between Analysis and Summary

ANALYSIS vs. SUMMARY

*        Summarizing is restating what the author has said, where analyzing is saying why the author says it.

http://writingcenter.unc.edu/handouts/summary-using-it-wisely/

 

Summary:  A brief paragraph describing and informing three or more of the following elements:

  1. Who: those involved
  2. What: the event or topic being covered
  3. When: time, period, era, night or day
  4. Where: the location, distance, place
  5. Why: the cause or causes
  6. How: the process(es)

Report: An extended summary that delves deeper into more descriptions and details of the above elements

 

Example:  This is a summary of the play Hamlet.

 

“The play Hamlet is one of betrayal and death.  In the beginning of the play Hamlet’s uncle, Claudius kills Hamlet’s father with poison.  He does this because he wants to be king, and he wants Gertrude, Hamlet’s mother.  Hamlet is very upset.  He becomes even more upset when Claudius, his uncle and his mother, Gertrude, announce they are to be married.  Hamlet cannot believe that they would do this after such a short period of time.  Hamlet then decides to kill his uncle to get revenge.  However, Hamlet waits to do this.   In the meantime Hamlet’s girlfriend Ofelia goes crazy and drowns herself.  Hamlet is also haunted by his father’s ghost.  At the end of the play, Hamlet dies.”

Analysis: examines the summary elements described above in order to look for their meaning in the following contexts:

  1. Relationships, trends, patterns
  2. Roles of people, places, objects, situations
  3. Consequences or results of events, decisions and processes
  4. Causes and their effects
  5. Advantages and disadvantages/ gains and losses
  6. Strengths and weaknesses

Example: A Freudian analysis of the play.

“Hamlet explores betrayal and death caused by several levels of poison: physical, psychological and social.  All of these poisons are intertwined on a psychological level.  Hamlet was first affected by Claudius’s physical poison—the poison that he had poured into the King’s ear, killing him.  After Claudius killed the King social poison spread throughout the kingdom like a disease.  The rebels began to call Laertes Lord, disrupting Hamlet’s claim to the throne, ‘How cheerfully on the false trail they cry’ (IV, V, 87).  Hamlet’s suppressed desire, the Oedipus complex, for his mother led to his own psychological poisoning, ‘Go not to mine uncle’s bed’ (III, III, 153).  He was upset that he desired to kill his father, as his uncle did, in order to possess his mother.  Hamlet desired to seek revenge on those who had hurt him, which was caused by his id, ‘Here thou incestuous, murderous, damned Dane, Drink of this potion’ (V, II, 330-333).  However, Hamlet hesitated to kill his uncle because of his moral super ego, ‘How I stand then, That have a father killed, a mother stained, Excitements of my reason and my blood, And let all asleep’ (IV, IV, 56-59)?  These inner psychological conflicts prevented Hamlet from acting until it was too late, and death was already knocking on his door, ‘The potent poison quiet o’er-crows my spirit’ (V, II, 359).” 

 

 

Difference between Analysis and Summary

Posted by msandhu on November 10, 2011

Writing a summary or an analysis seems like the easiest assignments but they can be very confusing. Many students confuse and mix summary with an analysis. They sometimes know what a summary is but they also think of analysis as a summary. However, they are two different things. A summary is rewriting what the story is about, but putting it in your own words. An analysis is breaking down the reading into smaller parts and examining it. I have put together some of the common factors that each one of them include.

SUMMARY

Writing a summary is not only limited to English classes. There are many other courses that you can take and you might have to write a summary. A summary is a report of author’s viewpoint. A summary is rewriting what you have read in your own words. One can think of the summary as the short version of the original writing. You should tell the reader what were the main and important points of the writing. Your summary should include the thesis or the main argument of the paper. In the summary, you should not include your opinion or what you think the author is trying to imply by writing it. It should only focus on what the author has written. Summary should also not include any kind of evaluation by the reader. You should not write what you think are the author’s strong or weak arguments.

One of the other important information the summary should include is the name of the book or article, the author’s name and the publication information. The publication information is when that piece of writing was first published (Date or year) and where was it published? This information usually goes in the introductory paragraph which is also going to include the thesis statement of the writing you have read.

The summary should also be formal. You should not address the author by their first name; use only their last name of the author. It is typed and usually only one paragraph depending on what you are writing about. I have only listed some of the most common factors that need to be included in the summary. Your instructor could give you a different structure they want you to follow and other guidelines.

ANALYSIS

An analysis is breaking a large topic into smaller pieces to better understand the subject. In an analysis you are not telling the reader about the main viewpoints of the author or what the writing is about, it is examining the structure and the details of the writing. You break the story into smaller parts to understand it better. Many instructors do not want you to express your opinion about the subject discussed in the paper. You can only give your opinion on how well the author did to convince the reader.

The first paragraph should be the introductory paragraph and it should include the title, author’s name, and publication details. You can also give the reader some background information on the subject being discussed in the writing and then give the thesis statement of the paper. First paragraph can also have a short summary about the paper.

In your analysis paper, you should address what is the main argument that the author is making and how well do they support the argument. The other factor to address is how reliable are the sources, and the authority that the author cites to make their argument strong. An analysis paper can also include the strengths and weaknesses of the paper and how they affect the argument being made by the author. You should also examine the tools like statistics, examples or citing of an authority to analyze the author’s reasoning for writing the paper. The other points one could address in their analysis paper are does the author address the opposition’s view point and does he/she attempts to refute it. Many instructors do not want you to express your opinion about the subject discussed in the paper. You can only give your opinion on how well the author did to convince the reader.  However, depending on your class level and your instructor it might be different and you might be allowed to express your opinion on the subject matter and tell whether you agree or disagree with the author.

It is very easy for many students to confuse analysis with a summary. They both have few similarities in the introductory paragraph but overall they have different structures. Most of the analyses or summaries will include many of the factors that I have listed above but you should always ask your instructors about what structure and guidelines they want you to follow. The structure and the information you put in your summary or analysis might also differ because of your class.


Editor’s note: While what Mohanjit says here is an excellent guideline as to the difference between summary and analysis, as a teacher, I’d feel a bit remiss if I didn’t mention that even with such seemingly fundamental terms as “analysis” and “summary,” teachers often have different understanding of what words mean. So, be aware that in addition to this excellent overview, your instructor may be looking for something specific in your analysis as well.

http://writingcenter.cos.edu/2011/11/difference-between-analysis-and-summary/