Critiques

You will be required to critique your fellow colleagues work in class oral and written, as well as present your own work for critique.  You will be required to critique your fellow colleagues work in class oral and written, as well as present your own work for critique. This rubric expects attendance at both critique days, otherwise will be considered below credit value or incomplete.  If you are not able to show your work because it is incomplete or for other reasons, please speak with your TA before class.


Critique Participation Rubric:

Levels of Achievement

Criteria Incomplete Missed Components Below Credit Value Novice Competent Proficient
Active Looking &Listening Not attempted Only attended one crit class or missed large components of class time or did not show own work Does not position in a way that engages with work, lacks focus in discussion Positions to engage with work most times, mostly understands details and adequate focus Always actively looking, detail oriented, shows consistency in responding to others Distinguished level of engagement with details of the work, listens to others the entire time and generative with peer comments, incorporating and building off ideas
Quality of Comments/Articulation Not attempted Only attended one crit class or missed large components of class time or did not shown own work Hard to distinguish relevancy or direction because of lack of clarity or purposelessness or attention to content While effort to communicate is evident and terminology and process adequate, at times can be convoluted and confused or comments are simplistic or sometimes irrelevant Delivered  appropriate comments that are thoughtful, insightful and reflective, articulating concepts and impositions relevant to artistic goals Exceptional relevancy that engages artistic vocabulary in a consistent and relevant way, clearly articulates difficult concepts that are thoughtful and considered to provoke intriguing questions and comments to the group
Respect Not attempted Only attended one crit class or missed large components of class time or did not shown own work Scathing for no purpose and lacking substance to back up, does not respect class code or lack of respect by way of lack of engagement Does not distract but does not exhibit enough engagement, lacks thoughtfulness Responds respectfully to other students remarks, respects class code and engaged in critique process Class code is respected, differing points of view are acknowledged, valued and seriously and generously engaged in progress of peers in class

 

Online Peer Review

Variations of the following prompt are provided for the Trickery (mid-term) and Appropriation (final) projects.  Below is an overview of expectations as written for the students, for updated versions please see Canvas.

When artists work in a studio, a useful part of the environment is the ability to give peer critique, suggestions and even evaluations of how a work is functioning.  In lieu of a physical studio, this component of the course and project aim to create a virtual studio that enables the same type of communication.

The peer critique will take place entirely online, (therefore you can do it from anywhere you have an internet connection if you are away during Reading week) using a really wonderful UBC created program called ComPAIR.  There is a link on your left that will automatically register you into the program when you first click.  Please be sure to log in to ComPAIR with your own sign in on Canvas, if you do it with another student signed in it will not work.  Please be sure there is no one else signed in to any UBC space when you click the link initially, otherwise you will not be able to use the program in your own student registration.

Part 1:  Upload your Project to ComPAIR

To start the online peer review process, please upload a rough or complete draft of your work, and please provide a working title for the work.  It is a visual artwork and should communicate with the viewer visually, therefore do not add an explanation of your idea.  If the work is unfinished, you should add a description of what you still have left to do for context.  But remember, do not add too much explanation, your project should explain itself visually!  At this point you should have your idea, sources, and a rough cut of the formal decisions of your composition.  A rough draft JPG file of your project should be uploaded to ComPAIR for your peers to see and critique.  A file cannot be more than xx for ComPAIR, so please reduce/compress the size of your file if it is larger than this.

Part II:  Online Critiques

You are asked to compare student projects and give thoughtful feedback. The online critiques will have NO BEARING on your grades, and are a tool to help you grow with the project and generously create a sense of community, not count as peer grading or competitive in any way.  This is about making people better and reach their potential in the project.  You are graded on how generous you can be to another student in improving their work.  A review of the process is as follows:

  • The peer review is set up to do two comparisons (2 projects) of peer work, three times.
  • Therefore, you are to complete three sets of comparisons, viewing 6 works, writing 6 feedback boxes of approx 150 considered words each (total of 900 words).
  • For each comparison pair, you have three specific questions to answer. They are provided on the comparison form.
  • After completing the three question comparison, you are able to give feedback to each student you have compared.  This feedback box is vital!  Please deliver generous and thoughtful constructive feedback so that the student may improve or understand where things may have gotten distracted.  The feedback box answer will be delivered to the student who has created the work, please be tactful and appropriate in your answers. Comments are meant to be constructive and helpful for the student who receives it; understand that text can come across quite blatantly, and you are to be mindful in how it reads. All judgements are to be backed up by hard proof found in the work.
  • In the feedback box, write one succinct paragraph for each work (at least 150 words each) describing how you dissected the image, and how you interpreted the meaning.  You should also consider if the assignment goals of ‘trickery’ were achieved, and how they were achieved.  Did the artwork meet the criteria using trickery as a tactic towards complicating meaning? Did all formal and process decisions demonstrate this understanding? Were there any decisions in execution that you felt were arbitrary or distracting?  Was there a personal investment and creativity in approaching the subject matter?  And finally, are there areas of the project that could have been improved, and even suggestions/examples on how they could do this.

Part III:  Read Feedback & Make Improvements

You will receive feedback from your colleagues to help you to improve your work.  You are allowed to change it as much as you want from the input you received, and in some cases, you may wish to start again, (as long as you learned from your previous iteration of the project what you wish to improve).  Please read your feedback to see where there might be disjoints in how your project is functioning to a viewer.  From here, you can adjust.  You are allowed to make changes on your project after this peer review, that is actually the point!

  • You are graded on your feedback to others.
  • Critiques are anonymous (unless you use your actual name, but you are not required to) and involve the entire lecture class.

Comparison Questions

  1. Which of the two projects in this comparison demonstrates a more effective use of trickery/appropriation?
    Which project used the concept of trickery in photography, or appropriation in moving image, as a way in which to complicate the ‘trick’ or ‘appropriation’ they created? Which project using the idea of ‘medium specificity’ or ‘appropriation’ of the digital as an enlightened approach to the message?
  2. Which work shows greater attention to detail in its execution decisions?
    At this point, which of the two projects carries a more succinct composition and arrangement of content to the idea they are executing? Which project does a better job of rendering their idea?
  3. Between the two projects, which work uses the idea of ‘trickery’ or ‘appropriation’ in a more complex way?
    Which project complicates or take a risk in what it is using trickery/appropriation for? Which project alludes to larger and/or more complex cultural/social/emotional/political issues in its rendition?

 

 

 

 

Appropriation

“Access is the most precious of all privileges, and it is therefore strictly guarded, which in turn makes one wonder whether to be a successful plagiarist, one must also be a successful hacker.”
-Critical Art Ensemble

“Good artists borrow. Great artists steal.”
-Pablo Picasso

The world is filled to suffocating.  Man has placed his token on every stone. Every word, every image, is leased and mortgaged.  We know that a picture is but a space in which a variety of images, none of the original, blend and clash.
-Sherrie Levine

The artistic question is no longer; “what can we make that is new?” but “how can we make do with what we have?.”  In other words, how can we produce singularity and meaning from this chaotic mass of objects, names and references that constitutes our daily life?
-Nicolas Bourriaud

You must borrow from any moving image source, such as film, commercial photography, television, video games, talk shows, commercials, songs, trailers, cartoons, old films, music or even art sources, to create a new appropriated work that reveals, exposes or changes meaning (or does all of these things) from the source’s original meaning.  Be creative in approach to the material sources and what your alterations or juxtapositions can relay to the viewer.  Be sure to be aware of the connotations and links that your sources contain within them, or the primary meaning of your sources, and let this inform your changes, and how your changes will be read. Therefore, we expect back-up research of the sources you are using and what place they take in society.  Adjust or manipulate your sources in a creative way towards new meaning or to reveal hidden meaning in savvy, artistic, poetic, magical, enticing way.  Think of how the meaning can be pushed or altered stylistically, through effects of slow motion or sped up, through juxtaposition, erasure, addition, and manipulation or even by way of a collection of scenes with a common theme.  We will be looking at how the appropriation of the original content of the source finds new meaning and a new way of receiving or looking at it, reveals original agency in an image and questions it, including the creation of myths or ideologies.

Create a meaningful and thoughtful piece that you will be proud of, a work that goes beyond being an ‘assignment’ and into the realm of art, something that approaches things in an accountable and critical view that you are concerned or provoked by.  You can even dissect or challenge the idea of appropriation itself.  Push boundaries!  This is Art!

Technical Requirements

For all projects, all sources must be appropriated, you may have one source or a thousand or anywhere in-between —only appropriated material allowed! 

A challenging part of this project is obtaining the original source files at a decent quality, so search out footage, images, or sound first, or let it inspire you before being stuck on an idea that you may not be able to execute.  Try archive.org, mediaburn.org, torrents, Google video, encoding YouTube videos or searches that specify” mp4” files for video’s.  This preliminary research is essential work.  We will understand and allow a ‘watermark’ or branding icon on your footage, as well as low resolution, and there are no grade deductions because of it –although it would be great to avoid it unless it informs your concept.  If all else fails, use a video camera and shoot your tv or computer screen, or in-screen recording, for editable footage!

Specific Requirements:

  • The project must be completed using Adobe Premiere Pro, and therefore you should use “Module 4:  Introductory Premiere” and as an option to expand your practice, you may also use tutorials provided in “Module 5:  Advanced Premiere” to help you through the project.
  • All projects can be completed on a PC or MAC platform using Adobe Premiere Pro, the programs are cross-platform but the demonstrations online are on a MAC.  Keep in mind that you may have to look up certain aspects that don’t transfer platforms, Premiere can be a bit more complicated than Photoshop in this.
  • The project must be between 15 seconds to 3 minutes in length, you may think about looping it if you wish for duration to be a present factor.  If you wish to go outside of this guideline, please speak to your TA or Christine about why, and we will consider.
  • The frame rate and dimension of the work is dependent on your footage, so there are no specific guidelines except to make the quality render the information of the footage decently.  You may work in standard (SD) or HD format, but please keep in mind the power and ability of your computer to handle HD video.  Rendering could also take quite a while, be aware of the time and equipment constraints, please work within your means.
  • You must submit both a working and final movie file for grading, the working Premiere file (PRPROJ) and also please create a compressed (MP4) or (MOV) file in H264 The final MP4 or MOV file cannot be more than 100 MB.  The final PRPROJ file needs to fit on your flash drive.
  • Failure to provide both files and your name on the drive and file name can result in a failing grade.

Along with your Premiere working file and .MP4 file for your final hand in, please provide the following information on a hard copy paper sheet, 1-2 pages in length, it must contain:

  • Your Name
  • Title of the Work
  • Duration of the work
  • Maximum 200 word description of your intentions making the work, and the relationship to ‘appropriation’
  • References (title, year and URL if possible) of appropriated sources found in your project
  • Summary (200 words) of feedback you received online and in consultation with peers and teachers, how you considered and incorporated feedback into revisions of the work. If you did not chose to listen to the feedback in deciding your revisions, please detail why not.

Artwork Rubric:

Criteria Ratings

Technical

 

10%

10.0 pts

Distinguished Work

Proof of initiative and superior grasp of program use

9.0 pts

Superior Grasp

Proof of further development and use of program

8.2 pts

Evidence of Extensive Knowledge Base

Program use beyond expectancy and appropriately

7.7 pts

Evidence of Critical Capacity and Analytic Ability

Program use achieved to a high standard

7.3 pts

Reasonable Understanding of Relevant Issues

Proof program was understood and used efficiently

6.8 pts

Competent Performance, Solve Simple Problems

Proof program was understood and used properly, able to solve simple problems

6.3 pts

Not Seriously Faulty but Lacking Style and Vigor

Technical elements showed redundancy or randomness, minimum proof

5.5 pts

Adequate

Acceptable but minimal technical proof shown in minimum requirements

4.9 pts

Almost Adequate

Technical execution faulty enough to not reach credit value

0.0 pts

No Marks

Formal

Arrangement, Craftsmanship, Delivery, Execution, Presentation Quality

 

25%

25.0 pts

Distinguished Work

Formal decisions inform subject, is creatively problem solved, and perfectly crafted

22.0 pts

Original Thinking, Superior Grasp

Problem-solved formal strategies in a creative way

20.0 pts

Evidence of Extensive Knowledge Base

Formal strategies strong, and meticulous attention to all details

18.0 pts

Evidence of Critical Capacity and Analytic Ability

Formal decisions enhance project and good craftsmanship

17.0 pts

Reasonable Understanding of Relevant Issues

Formal arrangement appropriate to subject, decent craftsmanship

16.0 pts

Competent Performance, Solve Simple Problems

Formal arrangement distracting to formula and/or careless craft

15.0 pts

Not Seriously Faulty but Lacking Style and Vigor

Formal arrangement barely met and/or faulty craftsmanship

14.0 pts

Adequate

Minimum formal arrangement, not thought through well

12.0 pts

Almost Adequate

Lacking proof of any formal work-through, composition, or attention to detail and craftsmanship

0.0 pts

No Marks

Conceptual

Framework, Risk-Taking, Originality, Creativity, Investment in Contemporary Issues, Social or Political Relevance, etc

 

25%

25.0 pts

Distinguished Work

Distinguished level of conceptual approach to assignment purpose and properties

22.0 pts

Original Thinking, Superior Grasp

Tackles conceptually challenging material, proving a nuanced understanding of subject

20.0 pts

Evidence of Extensive Knowledge Base

Risky or difficult subject matter creatively worked through

18.0 pts

Evidence of Critical Capacity and Analytic Ability

Problem-solved conceptually challenging subject matter

17.0 pts

Reasonable Undertanding of Relevant Issues

Good handle of conceptual approach of subject & project

16.0 pts

Competent Performance, Solve Simple Problems

Competent understanding of conceptual thought

15.0 pts

Not Seriously Faulty but Lacking Style and Vigor

Project goals met, though no further conceptual challenges posed

14.0 pts

Adequate

Manipulation or Appropriation in place with minimum thought or by way of forced project strategy

12.0 pts

Almost Adequate

Lacking conceptual framework

0.0 pts

No Marks

Project Goals

Overall Success and Meeting of Project Goals

 

25%

25.0 pts

Distinguished Work

Met project goals while also critically challenging assignment properties proven by a distinguished understanding of consequences of representational practices

22.0 pts

Original Thinking, Superior Grasp

Goals met with highly creative and critical approach in all decisions towards a work of art

20.0 pts

Evidence of Extensive Knowledge Base

Goals met with high understanding and investment of subject matter to support critical conviction of specific vision

18.0 pts

Evidence of Critical Capacity and Analytic Ability

Creatively approached project goals informed by critical look at subject matter

17.0 pts

Reasonable Undertanding of Relevant Issues

Competent approach to realizing project goals within most aspects

16.0 pts

Competent Performance, Solve Simple Problems

Proof of average understanding of project goals on expected level, low-level distractions evident

15.0 pts

Not Seriously Faulty but Lacking Style and Vigor

Project goals met with unoriginal or common approach

14.0 pts

Adequate

Proof of average understanding of project goals but with questionable distractions

12.0 pts

Almost Adequate

Project goals not met

0.0 pts

No Marks

Reflection & Revisions

 

15%

15.0 pts

Distinguished Work

Conveys strong and critical reflection with significant personal growth and awareness of deeper meaning and well developed insights that were synthesized into final improvements

14.0 pts

Superior Grasp

Critique was considered and critical reflection towards creatively problem-solving subtly nuanced or challenging strategies to address and improve

13.0 pts

Evidence of Critical Capacity and Analytic Ability

High level of consideration of peer review feedback with thorough attention to implications described and acted on

12.0 pts

Evidence of Extensive Knowledge Base

Critique was considered and response by way of improvement on execution exceeded expectations

11.0 pts

Reasonable Understanding of Relevant Issues

Reflective response included all components and met all requirements at an above average understanding

10.0 pts

Competent Performance, Solve Simple Problems

Reflection on peer feedback demonstrates some degree of critical thinking but follow through choices (or lack thereof) were inconsistent or not well executed

9.0 pts

Not Seriously Faulty but Lacking Style and Vigor

Demonstrates limited critical thinking in applying feedback and/or lacking follow-through or adequate response as to why not

8.0 pts

Adequate

Response lacks many essential components of critical reflection, addressed superficially or minimally

7.0 pts

Almost Adequate

Attempted but inadequate proof of understanding for credit

0.0 pts

No Marks

 

Saved Comments:

 

 

Formal
Headings Art gives space for a viewer to position themselves in relation to the proposals in the work, but unfortunately the written components in the work told the audience how to understand what they were seeing rather than letting the audience have their own genuine experience with the ideas. 
Sound/Soundtrack

The soundtrack used through the piece was not useful to the challenge of appropriation, you must be just as critical of the song/soundtrack you are appropriating as you are of the visuals you are appropriating.

The use of another artists’ expression as a narrative atop the piece does less to tell me about your take on the issues because you are using another’s creative/intellectual articulation to describe the issue. 

Using another’s work (speach, joke, etc) for your ‘meaning’ is not using appropriation critically by dissecting the representation, instead  you are using another artist’s words to insert the same meaning in your own work. We want to know how you are articulating this concept, not how others are!

‘Art’

(Xan, feel free to edit this one) Showing & Telling, rather than letting something emerge.

In art we have an opportunity to ‘show’ the viewer, rather than ‘tell’ them. In telling, we dictate what is transmitted and received, while in showing we allow our intended meaning to emerge alongside the meanings a viewer brings to their experience of the work. By pulling back a little bit, and showing, rather than telling, you can open your work up to others to find their own entry points.

While art is considered and accountable towards what it is depicting and how that operates in the world, it also opens a thoughtful and immersive visual space for its audience, rather than dictating what the audience should believe or how they should feel or  think about something. 

Something about abstraction?

Details

While you had a particular focus in most editing and compiling decisions, the editing decisions of your clips did not show concise conviction, and instead was too rather than breaking it down for the purposes of the assignment. In this instance the purpose of the new artwork is more important than your enthusiasm about the original narrative or joke in the original footage.

Your initial idea is good, but wasn’t pursued with enough critical, creative visual problem solving, and so decisions and rendering choices were confusing and somewhat extraneous.

Conceptual
Binary

I appreciated that you considered showing us that there are two sides to this issue, however the issue is more complex than just two binary versions.  

While you can argue that one version of this issue might take on a more truthful or ethical stance, it is good to be critical about how all representations work.  For future work, I encourage you to question the idea that some of the footage depicted here is more ‘real’ or the ‘truth’ when even it suffers from holding its own ideologies that don’t always represent the complexity of a situation.

Criticality

You have a good hold of the aesthetic dimension,  I encourage you to delve into more complex unveilings of critical analysis and conceptual underpinnings as a part of your art making.

Appropriation is not just about what the content represents, but how ideologies are mediated through society.

Didactic

I encourage you to push your work further than just illustrating an already established idea.  Instead, take the time to imagine and render positions of understanding of what this actually means, how it can be seen through details and nuances, expository critical dissections that go beyond explanation of a certain concept and into the realm of ‘art’. 

Art makes its viewer ask more deep questions rather than giving answers or conclusions, unfortunately this work acted more like propaganda than art.

The initial idea started a good conversation, but then the rendering leaned towards being too didactic.

Goals of Appropriation
Research

Research and deliberate connections to the original meaning and agency of the footage chosen was not well-researched, and choice of this specific footage was  incidental rather than purposeful.

More research, critical dissection, and intense scrutiny of how this footage informs ideologies is required for your work to also go into more complex discussions. 

The work was more of a fan-art homage to the footage rather than bringing out critical dissection research methods of appropriation tactics in art making.

The piece should have delved deeper into research of — as well as more experimentation and creative criticality in order to visually activate your line of inquiry.

Criticality In appropriation we aren’t just deconstructing how specific content is being depicted, but instead how representational systems and ideologies work as a whole.  
Irony It was difficult to assess your agency as using the repetition towards being ironic, or if you genuinely believe in the ideologies or beliefs this footage carries, but appropriation asks you to dissect these kinds of ideologies.

 

 

Trickery

The main difference seems to be that, whereas photography still claims some sort of objectivity, digital imaging is an overtly fictional process. As a practice that is known to be capable of nothing but fabrication, digitization abandons even the rhetoric of truth that has been such an important part of photography’s cultural success.
Geoffrey Batchen

If we want to call up more hopeful or positive uses of manipulated images, we must choose images in which manipulation is itself apparent, not just as a form of artistic reflexivity but to make a larger point about the truth value of photographs and illusionistic elements in the surface of (and even definition of) reality. 
Martha Rosler

Because photographs are products connected the ‘real’, people can be quite gullible and take them as truth. With the rise of digital technologies, many images have some form of manipulation which affects the way in which a photograph can be read, interpreted, and the meaning it conveys. Access to digital photographic manipulations on our phone and smart devices has complicated this further. Pixels have become the new pigment, and photographers can almost become painters. Digital media has given a new discourse to photography, a scrutiny and speculation on truth and manipulation in an image. You will employ this tension of manipulation versus the mechanical nature of photography on a topic you are interested in.

You are to create an image that enacts trickery. You must have an idea or meaningful purpose of why you used manipulation in your scene. You can use the camera on your phone, a professional camera, or a disposable camera. Be sure to plan your images well, and photograph them with post-production in mind. After bringing your images into the computer, execute your manipulation using Photoshop in one single document with many layers.

The manipulation can be, (and works best when it is) subtle and unassuming yet poignant. But, you may also create more exaggerated manipulations if your idea calls for it. Be careful of how you use symbols, codes, subject matter, particular references and what your manipulation can inform or impose. The trickery can be made by juxtaposing multiple images together to create one single image, changing lighting situations, proportions, multiplying elements, etc. Or you may erase or alter specific elements of an image by pushing pixels. There are many ways to manipulate in Photoshop and I encourage you to explore. Most important, be creative, thoughtful and informed of what the image will convey because of your ‘trick’. Every choice is important; therefore, you must carefully make decisions and experiment with what those decisions mean to the concept of the piece. It is not the amount of ‘trickery’ that is important, but why your trick informs meaning of the content -that will make a successful piece.

 

REQUIREMENTS

This project must be completed in one document with layers in Photoshop. You must use original photographs, this means you must take your own photos for the piece. If you wish to use found images, please consult with your TA or Christine to get permission. This project must be in colour, colour and density balanced and adjusted.  Size dimensions is a minimum of 8 inches on each side, proportions variable to your project, and must be of fine art printing quality (300 dpi) although you are not required to print it.  You are required to hand in a working .psd file and .jpg file on a labelled flash drive.  The photoshop file must be UNFLATTENED, therefore layers intact to show and prove your work.

You must name your .psd file by your last then first name, and you must label the exterior of your flash drive, failure to label your work with your name will result in a grade of zero.

Along with your flash drive, you must submit a maximum one page hard-copy print-out during lab to your TA with the following information:

  • Your Name
  • Title of the Work
  • Dimensions & Resolution (inches & DPI)
  • Maximum 100 word description of intention for the work, and its relationship to ‘trickery’ (this is for our ability to grade it if questions arise, we will not grade this description itself)
  • Maximum 150 word summary of received online peer feedback, how you considered the feedback and how you incorporated the feedback into revisions of the work.  If you did not use the feedback in your revisions, please detail why not.

*A reflection on the assignment will be given on due dates, due one week after their critiques, and part of their Trickery mark.

 

DUE DATES

Upload Trickery draft to ComPAIR by February 5, 11:59pm, online critiques open at 6pm after lecture and due on comPAIR by February 10, 11:59pm
Final Version of Trickery Project due February 13, 24 & 25 at the start of class time.

 

Criteria Ratings

Technical

 

10%

10.0 pts

Distinguished Work

Proof of initiative and superior grasp of program use

9.0 pts

Superior Grasp

Proof of further development and use of program

8.2 pts

Evidence of Extensive Knowledge Base

Program use beyond expectancy and appropriately

7.7 pts

Evidence of Critical Capacity and Analytic Ability

Program use achieved to a high standard

7.3 pts

Reasonable Understanding of Relevant Issues

Proof program was understood and used efficiently

6.8 pts

Competent Performance, Solve Simple Problems

Proof program was understood and used properly, able to solve simple problems

6.3 pts

Not Seriously Faulty but Lacking Style and Vigor

Technical elements showed redundancy or randomness, minimum proof

5.5 pts

Adequate

Acceptable but minimal technical proof shown in minimum requirements

4.9 pts

Almost Adequate

Technical execution faulty enough to not reach credit value

0.0 pts

No Marks

Formal

Arrangement, Craftsmanship, Delivery, Execution, Presentation Quality

 

25%

25.0 pts

Distinguished Work

Formal decisions inform subject, is creatively problem solved, and perfectly crafted

22.0 pts

Original Thinking, Superior Grasp

Problem-solved formal strategies in a creative way

20.0 pts

Evidence of Extensive Knowledge Base

Formal strategies strong, and meticulous attention to all details

18.0 pts

Evidence of Critical Capacity and Analytic Ability

Formal decisions enhance project and good craftsmanship

17.0 pts

Reasonable Understanding of Relevant Issues

Formal arrangement appropriate to subject, decent craftsmanship

16.0 pts

Competent Performance, Solve Simple Problems

Formal arrangement distracting to formula and/or careless craft

15.0 pts

Not Seriously Faulty but Lacking Style and Vigor

Formal arrangement barely met and/or faulty craftsmanship

14.0 pts

Adequate

Minimum formal arrangement, not thought through well

12.0 pts

Almost Adequate

Lacking proof of any formal work-through, composition, or attention to detail and craftsmanship

0.0 pts

No Marks

Conceptual

Framework, Risk-Taking, Originality, Creativity, Investment in Contemporary Issues, Social or Political Relevance, etc

 

25%

25.0 pts

Distinguished Work

Distinguished level of conceptual approach to assignment purpose and properties

22.0 pts

Original Thinking, Superior Grasp

Tackles conceptually challenging material, proving a nuanced understanding of subject

20.0 pts

Evidence of Extensive Knowledge Base

Risky or difficult subject matter creatively worked through

18.0 pts

Evidence of Critical Capacity and Analytic Ability

Problem-solved conceptually challenging subject matter

17.0 pts

Reasonable Undertanding of Relevant Issues

Good handle of conceptual approach of subject & project

16.0 pts

Competent Performance, Solve Simple Problems

Competent understanding of conceptual thought

15.0 pts

Not Seriously Faulty but Lacking Style and Vigor

Project goals met, though no further conceptual challenges posed

14.0 pts

Adequate

Manipulation or Appropriation in place with minimum thought or by way of forced project strategy

12.0 pts

Almost Adequate

Lacking conceptual framework

0.0 pts

No Marks

Project Goals

Overall Success and Meeting of Project Goals

 

25%

25.0 pts

Distinguished Work

Met project goals while also critically challenging assignment properties proven by a distinguished understanding of consequences of representational practices

22.0 pts

Original Thinking, Superior Grasp

Goals met with highly creative and critical approach in all decisions towards a work of art

20.0 pts

Evidence of Extensive Knowledge Base

Goals met with high understanding and investment of subject matter to support critical conviction of specific vision

18.0 pts

Evidence of Critical Capacity and Analytic Ability

Creatively approached project goals informed by critical look at subject matter

17.0 pts

Reasonable Understanding of Relevant Issues

Competent approach to realizing project goals within most aspects

16.0 pts

Competent Performance, Solve Simple Problems

Proof of average understanding of project goals on expected level, low-level distractions evident

15.0 pts

Not Seriously Faulty but Lacking Style and Vigor

Project goals met with unoriginal or common approach

14.0 pts

Adequate

Proof of average understanding of project goals but with questionable distractions

12.0 pts

Almost Adequate

Project goals not met

0.0 pts

No Marks

Reflection & Revisions

 

15%

15.0 pts

Distinguished Work

Conveys strong and critical reflection with significant personal growth and awareness of deeper meaning and well developed insights that were synthesized into final improvements

14.0 pts

Superior Grasp

Critique was considered and critical reflection towards creatively problem-solving subtly nuanced or challenging strategies to address and improve

13.0 pts

Evidence of Critical Capacity and Analytic Ability

High level of consideration of peer review feedback with thorough attention to implications described and acted on

12.0 pts

Evidence of Extensive Knowledge Base

Critique was considered and response by way of improvement on execution exceeded expectations

11.0 pts

Reasonable Understanding of Relevant Issues

Reflective response included all components and met all requirements at an above average understanding

10.0 pts

Competent Performance, Solve Simple Problems

Reflection on peer feedback demonstrates some degree of critical thinking but follow through choices (or lack thereof) were inconsistent or not well executed

9.0 pts

Not Seriously Faulty but Lacking Style and Vigor

Demonstrates limited critical thinking in applying feedback and/or lacking follow-through or adequate response as to why not

8.0 pts

Adequate

Response lacks many essential components of critical reflection, addressed superficially or minimally

7.0 pts

Almost Adequate

Attempted but inadequate proof of understanding for credit

0.0 pts

No Marks

Artwork Rubric:

 

Love

“Love” Exercise Prompt:
Please bring in a lens-based image that represents “love” in an interesting way and that has resonance upon how we would make meaning on the concept of love. It can be an original image made by you, but it can also be a found image from the world. Bring the image to the next lab class for discussion. It would be best if you could print it out, bring in a book or physical photograph or cut out of a magazine, etc…  Or you can show it on your phone, but please be sure to have enough battery and change your screen shut down time. The image must be captured by a lens; either a photograph or video clip.  If you do bring in a video clip, be sure it is under 10 seconds long so that the segment you pick is very specific.  Don’t let this small assignment overwhelm you, if anything just bring in an interesting image for the sake of conversation in how representing love works, and how it defines the concept of love.


Record student image and group work in class, and grade online reflection as the final component.

Love Workshop Rubric

Criteria Ratings

Contribution

6pts

6.0 Proficient
Submission brought in and relevant to be considered for completion
2.9 Below Credit Value
Submission attempted but missing thoughtful connection
0 Incomplete
No submission

Group Critique Work

8 pts

8.0 pts

Proficient

Critique methods applied with high understanding, relevance, and further pursued discussions towards analysis of consequences, judgement was detailed and thoughtfully considered, and showed thorough understanding of an analysis of representational systems

6.5 pts

Competent

Critique methods applied and relevant to work and ensued discussions, judgement showed thoughtfulness and understanding of how to approach, beyond “good” or “bad”

5.0 pts

Novice

General understanding of critique methods without much complexity, judgement was attempted, though irrelevant or missing nuance

3.9 pts

Below Credit Value

Less than half of the critique methods attempted, or lacking engagement, judgement was incoherent, irrelevant, or only partially complete

0.0 pts

Incomplete

Not attempted

Reflection

6 pts

6.0 pts

Proficient

Thoughtful reflection was proven towards understanding of future application, personal value, and overall growth

5.0 pts

Competent

Process of reflection proven, but not informed by class content and approaches

4.0 pts

Novice

Reflection was brief and lacked introspection or ambition

2.9 pts

Below Credit Value

Reflection was incoherent or irrelevant

0.0 pts

Incomplete

Reflection was not attempted, or attempted outside of class activities