To: Harsha Bhamra
From: Hannah Becker
Date: March 4, 2019
Subject: Peer Review of your ‘You’ Attitude Memo
Thank you for your memorandum. I found your ideas to be very practical and helpful. Here are some of my thoughts and suggestions:
Overall:
Your memo is concise and well-written. Your ideas are good and easy to understand. Your introduction is to the point without being rude, and your memo is organized well.
Writing Style:
Your writing style is consistent and clear. You do a good job of being polite and firm simultaneously.
Grammar and Errors:
Introduction
- Delete the word ‘more’ from the first sentence.
Best Practices
- De-capitalize the word ‘subject’ on the second line
- Change the word ‘avoiding’ to ‘avoid’ on the eighth line
- Use the full word ‘professor’ instead of ‘prof’ on the tenth line
- Either put periods at the end of all the lines or none of the lines
Conclusion
- Add a period at the very end
Your memorandum is very good overall. I hope that my suggestions are clear and helpful. If you have any questions, please contact me at hannahbecker1000@gmail.com.
Enclosed: Harsha’s ‘You’ Attitude Memo
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