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Essay exemplar

Essay exemplar

Jordan wants to have a nice, long summer at the end of seventh grade; her persuasive essay makes that quite evident with several points that support her opinion through the use of statistics, comparison, and expert testimony.

 

Summer: 15 Days or 2 1/2 Months?

The final bell rings. It’s the last day of school, and summer has finally come! Students don’t have to think about school for at least another 2 1/2 months. That is the way it should always be. Schools should continue using the traditional calendar and not a year-round schedule. There are numerous downsides to year-round schooling. It has no positive effects on education, it adds to costs, and it disrupts the long-awaited summer vacation.

Contrary to the well-accepted belief, year-round schooling has no constructive impact on education. Most year-round schedules use the 45-15 method: 45 days of school followed by 15 days off. Because of this, there are many first and last days of school. All those transitions disrupt the learning process. Also, there is no evidence of higher test scores. Due to that, many schools that change to year-round schedules end up switching back. For example, since 1980, 95 percent of schools that tried the year-round schedule changed back to a traditional calendar. It is obvious that changing to year-round schooling does not help students; therefore, why is the change necessary?

Like any other facility, keeping a school open requires a great deal of money. When a school changes to a year-round schedule, the costs skyrocket. Keeping school open in the middle of summer requires air conditioning, and that adds significantly to the school’s expenses. The usual utility bills grow because of the additional open-school time. Finally, teachers must be paid for all the weeks they are working. With all these factors, the cost of keeping schools open becomes immensely high. For example, a high school in Arizona had a cost increase of $157,000 when they switched to year-round schooling. Some schools may not be able to handle such increases, and other schools that can handle these expenses could be doing better things with the money. Is year-round school really where the money should go?

An important part of a child’s life is summertime. With year-round schedules, students would hardly have any time to relax. During the 15-day breaks, they would be thinking about their quick return to school. It would also be difficult to coordinate family vacations with parents’ work schedules. Similarly, children would not be able to go to most summer camps. One expert, Dr. Peter Scales, says, “The biggest plus of camp is that camps help young people discover and explore their talents, interests, and values. Most schools don’t satisfy all these needs. Kids who have these kinds of [camp] experiences end up being healthier and have fewer problems.” Obviously, the summer is crucial to a child’s learning and development. Why should this invaluable part of a young person’s life be taken away?

It is evident that year-round schooling is not the best option for the school calendar. There is absolutely nothing wrong with the traditional school year. Why change something that works so well? The final bell rings. Let’s make sure this bell means that the “real” summer vacation has come.

Gr 9 Open book quiz

Please prepare short answers and an essay on the following questions, using any materials (Issues for Canadians (textbook), student presentation notes, Charter of Rights and Freedoms, (strongly recommended), examples from class materials (see gr. 9 Assignments page for links to White Paper, reactions, Francophone rights timeline), other online sources such as the Canadian Encyclopedia – must be cited).

Chapter 4 quiz – SS Rubric

We will go over the rest of the Action Doc questions and these briefly, and allow some class time to finish up.

 

Quiz Questions

Short Answer – provide examples for support.

  1. In what ways has the Canadian Charter of Rights and Freedoms fostered recognition of collective rights in Canada?
  2. In what ways does the Canadian Charter of Rights and Freedoms meet the needs of Francophones in minority settings?
  3. How does the Indian Act recognize the status and identity of Aboriginal peoples?
  4. How does legislation such as Treaty 6, Treaty 7 and Treaty 8 recognize the status and identity of Aboriginal peoples?
  5. How do governments recognize Métis cultures and rights through legislation (i.e., treaties, governance, land claims, Métis Settlements in Alberta)?

ESSAY Qs – CHOOSE ONE

  1. To what extent does the Canadian Charter of Rights and Freedoms meet the needs of Francophones in Québec?
  2. To what extent should federal and provincial governments support and promote the rights of official language minorities in Canada?

My plan currently is to have an open-book, open-note quiz on the questions above. (MCQ or matching style may be considered).

Alternative essay questions relevant to collective rights as part of the idea of Canadian identity are welcome for consideration.

LA 9 – grades adjustment

HU9 folks, it has come to my attention that Chicago was incorrectly set at /36, when it should be /6. This lowered everyone’s score considerably, so please disregard the current print-out and refer to it only as a checklist. I will prepare a new update after Friday assignments are submitted in order to get an updated report to you for Tuesday.

My apologies for the error and delay.

Gr 9 – Ch 4 Collective Rights Notes

Notes- Pg 118-122

  • Collective rights are granted to groups in society for historical and constitutional reasons

 

    • They are given because a person belongs to a group in society

 

    • Examples of these groups include First Nations, Metis, Inuit, Francophones, and Anglophones

 

    • Not everyone has collective rights

 

  • These rights are established and protected by the Canadian constitution

 

    • Aims to create a society where different identities are accepted

 

    • Acknowledges the founding peoples of Canada

 

  • Collective identities are declared with the collective rights

 

    • A collective identity is a common identity shared with a group of people

 

    • Language and culture contribute to collective identities

 

  • Many legislations are related to collective rights

 

    • Examples: Indian Act, Manitoba Act, Canada’s Constitution, Charter of Rights and Freedoms

Quiz Questions

 

In what ways has the Canadian Charter of Rights and Freedoms fostered recognition of collective rights in Canada?

 

  • The Canadian Charter of Rights and Freedoms recognizes collective rights in Canada by granting language rights to collective identities such as the Francophones and Anglophones.

 

  • The Minority Language Education Rights also allows minority Anglophone and Francophone groups to have their children receive education in their language.

 

Critical Questions

 

  1. Why are collective rights important to all Canadians?

 

  • Collective rights are important to all Canadians because they are an important part of the constitution that develops respect for all cultural groups, enabling Canada to be the multicultural country it is today.

 

  1. Why do you believe Canadians want to commemorate the link between history and the identities of Francophones, First Nations people and the Metis?

 

  • Canadians would most likely want to commemorate the link between history and the identities of Francophones, First Nations and the Metis because their groups contributed greatly to the history of Canada as its founding peoples.

 

Pages 141 – 144 – Colin & Evan L

 

English Speaking French Speaking Inuktitut Speaking
Yukon Quebec Nunavut
North West Territories
British Columbia
Alberta
Saskatchewan
Manitoba
Ontario
Newfoundland and Labrador
New Brunswick
Nova Scotia
Prince Edward Island

 

 

Rachel St. Laurent attends a Francophone school in Falher, Alberta. She feels that it is important to learn French because it is part of her heritage and she plans to pass her knowledge down to her children. Even though her community is mostly English speaking and she worries she will lose her French speaking ability, she presses on to show her community that just because someone speaks a different language doesn’t mean they’re inferior.

 

Devin Mens, english speaking student who attends Quebec high school in Quebec City is comfortable with his situation. He says being an Anglophone in Quebec can be hard since only 5% of the population is English speaking but he is not worried about losing his identity because it makes you more prominent

 

In what ways does the Canadian Charter of Rights and Freedoms meet the needs of Francophones in minority settings?

 

Provinces establish Francophone schools in minority areas and encourage Francophone culture in the community.

  English is spoken most but French is important and Quebec speaks French.

 

 

152-154-Matheson

 

1869-1870

-The metis people were promised over 500000 hectares of land

1875-1879

-the Indians were offered an option to have either land in Manitoba or become “treaty Indians”. Metis were not offered the same land as Indians so they got the land in Manitoba.

-Metis had the same rights to land as first nations but they don’t need to go on reserves

1985

-the northern resistance fought to protect metis rights, they were fighting to assert their rights, like the red river resistance

– it was an attempt to overthrow Canadas government.

1986-1910

-metis farmers established farms in St.Paul des metis, near what is now St. Paul Alberta, on land provided by the catholic church

-the Metis did not have a title to this land, and had to leave when the settlement had to leave

155-Justin

1938

L’Association des Métis de l’Alberta et des Territoires du Nord-Ouest: Lobbied for land to be set aside for the Metis alone.

Metis population betterment act was passed to set aside land for the Metis.

James Brady, Malcolm Norris, Felix Calihoo, Peter Tomkins and Joseph Dion created L’Association des Métis de l’Alberta, which lobbied for Metis reserves. Just lik our society, the Metis had split opinions in the matter.

1940–1960

The land was not in control of the Metis. When 4 settlements proved unsuitable for farming, hunting, and fishing, the government simply reclaimed the land.

156-158-Maddie

-Metis lobbied for recognition of their rights in the constitution. Section 35 recognizes the metis as aboriginal people. (constitution act of 1982)

1990

Metis “received” the metis settlements as a permanent land base, and the right to manage their own affairs under the government enacted legislation which included:

*Constitution of Alberta Amendment Act

*Metis Settlements Accord Implementation Act

*Metis Settlement Act

*Metis Settlement Land Protection Act

Autonomy: Authority to make decisions

2003

Supreme court ruled that the metis have the right to hunt and fish as one of canada’s aboriginal people under the constitution.

2004

Metis can hunt and fish for food without a license.

2006

April- Metis in Manitoba launched a court case seeking compensation for land promised, but not delivered, in the manitoba act.

2007

Alberta government put rules in place that restricted these rights without agreement from the metis organizations.

Gr 9 Review – Language Rights

Many people seem to think that Language Rights in Canada protect the use of any language in the world in Canada. Freedom of speech covers that, however, language rights are specific to Canada’s official language use & education.

http://www.charterofrights.ca/en/18_00_01

 

Language Rights – Charter of Rights and Freedoms

The Language Rights in the Charter of Rights and Freedoms are presented in two sections, the Official Languages of Canada and Minority Language Education Rights. This section of the Charter proclaims English and French are the official languages of the country and that federal services must be provided in both languages. This section includes specific provisions for New Brunswick where provincial services are provided in both official languages.

Minority Language Education Rights address the rights of Canadian parents to have their children educated in either French or English in any part of the country. Explore this critical cultural section of the Charter.

The Absolutely True Diary – Novel Study Assignment

ESSAY TOPICS for the ABSOLUTELY TRUE DIARY OF A PART-TIME INDIAN

Essay Topics absolutely true diary

or Q 1-5, 8 or 11 at the back of the novel.

 

**PLEASE NOTE THE HISTORICAL AND GEOGRAPHICAL USE OF THE WORD “INDIAN” IS ACCEPTABLE ONLY WHEN PEOPLE SELF-IDENTIFY  AS SUCH.

IN CANADA THE WORD HAS FALLEN OUT OF ACCEPTANCE IN FAVOUR OF A PERSON’S NATION, FIRST NATIONS, INUIT OR METIS; ABORIGINAL PEOPLE; AND INDIGENOUS PEOPLE AS REFERRING TO ABORIGINAL PEOPLE OF THE WORLD. “NATIVE” SHOULD BE USED WITH CAUTION AND RESPECT TO THE CONVERSATION.

YOU SHOULD ONLY REFER TO “INDIAN” AS IT IS USED IN A HISTORICAL CONTEXT, WITHIN THE BOOK’S TITLE, OR TO REFER TO THE AUTHOR’S PERSPECTIVE, WHICH IN AMERICA, HAS NOT ADJUSTED.**

Difference between Analysis and Summary

ANALYSIS vs. SUMMARY

*        Summarizing is restating what the author has said, where analyzing is saying why the author says it.

http://writingcenter.unc.edu/handouts/summary-using-it-wisely/

 

Summary:  A brief paragraph describing and informing three or more of the following elements:

  1. Who: those involved
  2. What: the event or topic being covered
  3. When: time, period, era, night or day
  4. Where: the location, distance, place
  5. Why: the cause or causes
  6. How: the process(es)

Report: An extended summary that delves deeper into more descriptions and details of the above elements

 

Example:  This is a summary of the play Hamlet.

 

“The play Hamlet is one of betrayal and death.  In the beginning of the play Hamlet’s uncle, Claudius kills Hamlet’s father with poison.  He does this because he wants to be king, and he wants Gertrude, Hamlet’s mother.  Hamlet is very upset.  He becomes even more upset when Claudius, his uncle and his mother, Gertrude, announce they are to be married.  Hamlet cannot believe that they would do this after such a short period of time.  Hamlet then decides to kill his uncle to get revenge.  However, Hamlet waits to do this.   In the meantime Hamlet’s girlfriend Ofelia goes crazy and drowns herself.  Hamlet is also haunted by his father’s ghost.  At the end of the play, Hamlet dies.”

Analysis: examines the summary elements described above in order to look for their meaning in the following contexts:

  1. Relationships, trends, patterns
  2. Roles of people, places, objects, situations
  3. Consequences or results of events, decisions and processes
  4. Causes and their effects
  5. Advantages and disadvantages/ gains and losses
  6. Strengths and weaknesses

Example: A Freudian analysis of the play.

“Hamlet explores betrayal and death caused by several levels of poison: physical, psychological and social.  All of these poisons are intertwined on a psychological level.  Hamlet was first affected by Claudius’s physical poison—the poison that he had poured into the King’s ear, killing him.  After Claudius killed the King social poison spread throughout the kingdom like a disease.  The rebels began to call Laertes Lord, disrupting Hamlet’s claim to the throne, ‘How cheerfully on the false trail they cry’ (IV, V, 87).  Hamlet’s suppressed desire, the Oedipus complex, for his mother led to his own psychological poisoning, ‘Go not to mine uncle’s bed’ (III, III, 153).  He was upset that he desired to kill his father, as his uncle did, in order to possess his mother.  Hamlet desired to seek revenge on those who had hurt him, which was caused by his id, ‘Here thou incestuous, murderous, damned Dane, Drink of this potion’ (V, II, 330-333).  However, Hamlet hesitated to kill his uncle because of his moral super ego, ‘How I stand then, That have a father killed, a mother stained, Excitements of my reason and my blood, And let all asleep’ (IV, IV, 56-59)?  These inner psychological conflicts prevented Hamlet from acting until it was too late, and death was already knocking on his door, ‘The potent poison quiet o’er-crows my spirit’ (V, II, 359).” 

 

 

Difference between Analysis and Summary

Posted by msandhu on November 10, 2011

Writing a summary or an analysis seems like the easiest assignments but they can be very confusing. Many students confuse and mix summary with an analysis. They sometimes know what a summary is but they also think of analysis as a summary. However, they are two different things. A summary is rewriting what the story is about, but putting it in your own words. An analysis is breaking down the reading into smaller parts and examining it. I have put together some of the common factors that each one of them include.

SUMMARY

Writing a summary is not only limited to English classes. There are many other courses that you can take and you might have to write a summary. A summary is a report of author’s viewpoint. A summary is rewriting what you have read in your own words. One can think of the summary as the short version of the original writing. You should tell the reader what were the main and important points of the writing. Your summary should include the thesis or the main argument of the paper. In the summary, you should not include your opinion or what you think the author is trying to imply by writing it. It should only focus on what the author has written. Summary should also not include any kind of evaluation by the reader. You should not write what you think are the author’s strong or weak arguments.

One of the other important information the summary should include is the name of the book or article, the author’s name and the publication information. The publication information is when that piece of writing was first published (Date or year) and where was it published? This information usually goes in the introductory paragraph which is also going to include the thesis statement of the writing you have read.

The summary should also be formal. You should not address the author by their first name; use only their last name of the author. It is typed and usually only one paragraph depending on what you are writing about. I have only listed some of the most common factors that need to be included in the summary. Your instructor could give you a different structure they want you to follow and other guidelines.

ANALYSIS

An analysis is breaking a large topic into smaller pieces to better understand the subject. In an analysis you are not telling the reader about the main viewpoints of the author or what the writing is about, it is examining the structure and the details of the writing. You break the story into smaller parts to understand it better. Many instructors do not want you to express your opinion about the subject discussed in the paper. You can only give your opinion on how well the author did to convince the reader.

The first paragraph should be the introductory paragraph and it should include the title, author’s name, and publication details. You can also give the reader some background information on the subject being discussed in the writing and then give the thesis statement of the paper. First paragraph can also have a short summary about the paper.

In your analysis paper, you should address what is the main argument that the author is making and how well do they support the argument. The other factor to address is how reliable are the sources, and the authority that the author cites to make their argument strong. An analysis paper can also include the strengths and weaknesses of the paper and how they affect the argument being made by the author. You should also examine the tools like statistics, examples or citing of an authority to analyze the author’s reasoning for writing the paper. The other points one could address in their analysis paper are does the author address the opposition’s view point and does he/she attempts to refute it. Many instructors do not want you to express your opinion about the subject discussed in the paper. You can only give your opinion on how well the author did to convince the reader.  However, depending on your class level and your instructor it might be different and you might be allowed to express your opinion on the subject matter and tell whether you agree or disagree with the author.

It is very easy for many students to confuse analysis with a summary. They both have few similarities in the introductory paragraph but overall they have different structures. Most of the analyses or summaries will include many of the factors that I have listed above but you should always ask your instructors about what structure and guidelines they want you to follow. The structure and the information you put in your summary or analysis might also differ because of your class.


Editor’s note: While what Mohanjit says here is an excellent guideline as to the difference between summary and analysis, as a teacher, I’d feel a bit remiss if I didn’t mention that even with such seemingly fundamental terms as “analysis” and “summary,” teachers often have different understanding of what words mean. So, be aware that in addition to this excellent overview, your instructor may be looking for something specific in your analysis as well.

http://writingcenter.cos.edu/2011/11/difference-between-analysis-and-summary/