Author: erikapaterson

Tips for your Application Package

YOU  attitude example: Student Letter of Application missing You Attitude: Without YOU attitude:  Given my experience as Membership Management Trainee at Canadian Chamber of Commerce in Hong Kong, I have confidence in supporting the development and maintenance of the Annual

Editing out Imperative Verbs

Examples of how to remove imperative verbs: “You must make use of your headline by using good keywords referring to your field or interests so employers can find your profile when they are searching for candidates. Please fill in your

YOU attitude: tips and examples

You can find a few post on Writing with YOU attitude on this blog, if you searc. However, learning the techniques of writing with YOU attitude is so valuable, I am dedicating this page to a collection of past YOU

DETAILS PLEASE …..

Home › Instructor’s Blog › DETAILS – please … Posted on December 4, 2018 by erikapaterson Posted in Instructor’s Blog — No Comments ↓ This is a re-post of a re-post of a blog that too many people seem to have missed or forgotten. One of the tricks of

Tips for writing a a Final Formal Report

When self-editing your Formal Report keep in mind the most common and serious errors: Writing with a negative tone: Avoid the negative. Writing with a demanding tone: Respect your reader, edit out imperative verbs. Writing information that your reader already

Surveys: Ethical Introductions

Survey and Interview Introduction: an example  A common error with this assignment is the composition of the introduction to your surveys; this is a very important. You must fulfill research ethics.  Here is a good example for you to study and

An example of a review for a Proposal

A Student Example of a Peer Review for a Report Proposal   Please note the minimal use of pronouns: I / You / Yours Please note the minimal use of imperative verbs   By XXX on June 12, 2016 To: XXX

An example of a Linked-In Peer review to study

ENGL 301: LinkedIn Peer Review Form Here is an example of an excellent LinkedIn peer review to study: well organized, complete, concise and clear. Please note the minimal use of pronouns: I / You / Yours Please note the minimal

TIP: Avoid the negative

There are two major rules of persuasion for Formal Reports Avoid the Negative Employ YOU Attitude Turning the negative into the positive: Examples: Negative:  With a decrease of events and marketing, fewer students are inspired to participate in club activities

Always consider your reader first

First rule: ALWAYS CONSIDER YOUR READER FIRST: Why are they reading, what do they need to know? Second rule: ALWAYS CONSIDER YOUR READER A VERY BUSY PERSON: stay clear and concise – brevity is better. Third rule: REMOVE EACH AND

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