To: John Smith, Team Member
From: Erfan Ahmed, Team Editor
Date: September 27th 2019
Subject: Peer review of Distributed Systems
Hi John,
I have taken the time to review your term definitions for Distributed systems and wanted to acknowledge that it was a very concise and informative term that you chosen to write about. I have always been intrigued by certain terms in the computing sciences field, and you have definitely made it an enjoyable experience learning deeper about distributed systems, especially since I have very limited knowledge about it. Furthermore, in the growing world of technology, I believe it is beneficial to acquire more knowledge regarding information technology and computing sciences to advance both professionally and academically.
With that being said, here are some suggestions for you:
Purpose: Although you did mention a purpose for your chosen term, I do appreciate you using the term in a situation to make it more understandable for someone who would otherwise not be familiar with the term.
Audience: The definitions that you have presented are easy to comprehend, and make it clear and concise for a non-scholar. One of the only terms that I was not familiar with in your writing was ‘RF/NFC’ which would have benefited from having the full abbreviation for the term.
Organization: The definitions that you have posted were all clear and concise and easy for anybody to understand from a non-computing background.
Visual/font: The visual image chosen was a nice representation of the concept of distributed systems and how it plays within the context
Thanks for sharing your take on Distributed Systems, and keep up the great work!
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