Lesson 2:2 Linked In Peer Review

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Hi Amy, I loved reading through your profile and learning about the cool experiences you’ve had. Below are a few of my suggestions, organized by criteria, description of criteria, and comments on your profile.

Linkedin Peer Review

Date: October 25, 2019

Reviewed by: Jenny Zhu

For: Amy Vergouwen

Criteria	Description	Comments
First Impressions	Information organized and easy to read High level of professionalism Things that left an impression Items that need any immediate revising (in any)	Your LinkedIn profile in professional and reflects an outstanding individual who is involved in their community and has many skills in the field of Psychology. The profile is easy to understand and there is nothing that needs to be changed urgently.
Profile Picture	Profile picture uploaded Clear, high resolution picture No to minimal distractions (e.g. very bright patterns, too much background noise) present	The picture shows your face clearly, and has a good neutral background. Your smile is welcoming.
Headline and Summary	Headline and summary present Captivating summary, and appropriate in length Summary captures the author’s interests, experience, and personality	For the headline, perhaps consider including what you are a student of. Your summary is short but contains a lot of information. Maybe it will help others to get to know you a more by including things outside of the professional/academic world and talking about a project you’ve worked on.
Experience	Titles and dates present Informative description to accompany each experience Up to date experiences	Each experience is accompanied by a date and description. I’m not sure if it is necessary to state “Employee of name of company” at the beginning of each description. You have included recent work experiences, which shows to employers that you are involved in your field.
Education	Name of institution and program present and accurate Involvements or award listed	Name of school and program is present. Description of courses and personal achievements helps paint what you have gained from your degree.
Licenses, Certifications, Publications	Titles clear, and explanations provided if necessary	Not applicable.
Volunteer Experience	Tasks performed listed Names of organizations stated	Volunteer organizations and length of volunteering are listed. I noticed the descriptions here were shorter than your work experiences. Personally, I don’t feel that just because something is a volunteer position you should include less about it. Those experiences all sound very interesting.
Skills	Concise and accurate	Are there any other skills you could include? Your profile covered a lot of other ones!
Grammar & Language	Professional language Grammar checked thoroughly	Language is suitable for a Linked In profile. There are no visible spelling or grammar mistakes.
Organization & Layout	Evident organization (e.g. chronological) Consistent formatting If applicable, images and files are correctly attached	Chronological order helps organize your profile. Phrasings are consistent. Paraph-style descriptions are used throughout.
Conclusion	Concluding comments and overall impression	Your profile is complete and has a lot of information about your experiences. With one quick glance I believe employers will get a good sense of your fit for their company. I think the next step would be to: Include some more details in the summary section Fill out more information about some of your experiences Grow your connections steadily Strong profile overall. Thank you for sharing it with me!

Amy’s Linkedin page: https://www.linkedin.com/in/amy-vergouwen-01306417b/

Linkedin Peer Review Template: ENGL 301 Jenny Zhu Lesson 2_2 Linked In Peer Review Template

Lesson 2:2 Linked In Peer Review

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