LinkedIn Peer Review
Peer Review for:Amy Yung
Reviewed by:Lisa Liang
Date:October 26, 2019
Brief Message: Hi Amy, I have reviewed your LinkedIn profile and I was very impressed by your accomplishments and achievements! You have done particularly well with providing detailed descriptions of each of your job descriptions. Please allow me to share some of my thoughts below:
| Section | Criteria | Comments |
| Profile & About | · Professional headshot
· Complete profile · Warm and welcoming summary section |
Profile is complete with professional profile picture. Summary section outlines your interests and current experiences you’re seeking |
| Work Experience | · Listed in either chronological or functional order
· Dates and job title listed for each experience · Short description of responsibilities/experience for each job |
You did a great job with listing your work experiences in chronological order. Along with each experience, you’ve also detailed responsibilities and duties. I just thought that you could add a bit more on your experience as a Cadets leader. For instance, what activities you led or the size of the groups you led. |
| Volunteer Experience | · Listed in either chronological or functional order
· Dates and title listed for each experience · Short description of responsibilities of each experience |
I noticed that you only have one experience listed under your Volunteer section, but I did notice that you probably have more that than, based on the descriptions listed under your work experience such as YOURS student association and Royal Cadets leader. |
| Education | · Listed in chronological order
· Field of study/major included |
Education clearly listed with your major
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| Skills & Accomplishments | · List of skills and accomplishments | I noticed that you have a long list of accomplishments, however, they seem to all be courses you’ve taken. You can also consider adding accomplishments from your volunteer and work experience. For example, sale stats or differences you’ve made in your community. |
| Overall Impression | · Organization of each section
· Consistency of title, spacing, dates, and lists · Current work/volunteer title listed under name |
Aside from the small modifications with your accomplishment section and volunteer experience, you’ve done a great job with your profile. Your linked in was very well organized with your experiences clearly listed. |
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Amy’s LinkedIn Page: https://www.linkedin.com/in/amy-yung-a01227106/
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