To: Joyce Wu
From: Brenda Martinez
Subject: Peer review-LinkedIn Profile
LinkedIn Link: https://www.linkedin.com/in/joyce-wu-540118197/
Peer-Review Template pdf: 2.2 Peer Review Template-Brenda Martinez
Hello Joyce,
I have recently visited your LinkedIn profile, and I have enjoyed reading through all of the categories that you included. You have a great amount of work and education experience, I am sure this will be helpful in your future employment search and building your networking connections. Following is my peer-review of your LinkedIn profile.
Profile and Headline
- The headline is fun and “catchy”, very personable and interesting.
- Would have liked to see a profile photo and maybe a personalized background picture.
- The overall profile has a welcoming attitude.
- Included a custom URL link to profile which was useful for profile search
Profile Summary
- The profile summary is straightforward and easy to understand.
- I thought it was great, and it included good information for your visitors on LinkedIn. However, I would have liked to have read more about your professional roles and skill-sets in your summary.
- It summarized current career goals as they pertain to your career path.
- I also liked that it was personable too, included favourite past-times and hobbies.
Experience, Education, and Volunteer Experiences
- The profile highlights an extensive array of experiences in the professional career setting.
- Job descriptions were thorough, it was detailed, and explained in each section what her role was within each organization.
Skills, Accomplishments, and Interests
- Skills and interests were identified in this section
Grammar, Punctuation, and Writing Style
- Well written with LinkedIn networking in mind
- No grammatical errors noted, style is welcoming and personable
Overall Impression and Comments:
Overall great work Joyce!
Some suggestions I have for you would be to add a photograph, and maybe personalize the background to uniquely customize your page. I also wasn’t sure if in the ‘Experience’ section some of the work you have included are volunteer experiences? I enjoyed receiving an invitation to connect with you on LinkedIn. I found your profile page was set-up nicely, and I am sure that with some minor adjustments, and as you add to the page throughout this course, you should have a good platform to network with other professionals.
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