To: Tameen Imran
From: Connor Runnalls
Date: October 31, 2019
Subject: LinkedIn Profile Peer Review
LinkedIn URL: https://www.linkedin.com/in/tameeni/
Tameen,
Attached below is a completed peer review, accompanied by the full rubric as required. It will be noted that there are, in fact, no recommendations for revision. There were a couple of minuscule grammatical changes, as noted in the grammar section.
First impression:
The first impressions of this profile page were that of evident experience and familiarity with LinkedIn. The profile is well rounded with extensive detail in all aspects/sections found on the page. The 76 connections, extensive work, and volunteering experience further support the depth of the LinkedIn page, prior to diving into full detail.
Profile Picture:
The picture used appears to be current and professionally taken. It meets the guideline requirements for a headshot picture.
Title Box
The Title Box is used effectively with a clear, precise title that catches the eye of profile viewer
The Summary
The summary section does an excellent job of summarizing current activities, skills, and future endeavours. The three sections are clear, efficient, and easy to follow while having excellent flow throughout. Brief descriptions of skills, experience, and aspirations capture attention, while also setting up the rest of the profile in an effective manner.
Experience and Volunteering
The experience and volunteering sections are filled out extensively with information that includes tasks carried out at each job/experience, skills gained, and demonstrate a rather impressive amount of diversity.
Education
The education section is filled as required, including the various societies associated with.
Skills and Endorsements
While there is not necessarily an overwhelming number of skills displayed, they all have been endorsed, which adds a significant amount of value to a profile.
Grammar
The profile was relatively free of grammatical and punctuation errors. One small revision would be “hands-on” in the summary as opposed to “hands on”. However, this example was one of the extremely minor details, others are punctuation revisions that are more preference (such as comma placement).
Conclusion
Overall, there is almost nothing that needs to necessarily be added to. Perhaps some small nitty-gritty grammatical details could be changed, but even to that point, they are almost more so of personal preference and not necessary. The profile is complete with extensive detail and professionalism while maintaining a clear and concise approach. Excellent job!
Peer Review Template- Tameen Imran LinkedIn Review
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