Date: November 1, 2019
Peer Reviewer: Priyanka Patel
LinkedIn Profile Author: Yury Zhuk
LinkedIn URL: https://www.linkedin.com/in/yzhuk/
Hello Yury,
Thank you for sharing your LinkedIn Profile link for review. This is an impressive profile with clear and concise information. Please find my comments and suggestions to strengthen the profile.
First Impressions
First impression of the page has exceeded the expectations of the profile. There are 246 connections which shows extended networking allowing job recruiters and viewers to see expertise. Moreover, personal URL gives further information about expertise and hobbies.
Profile Photo
The profile picture is quite personable, and professional.
Title Box
Title box clearly defines current status for recruiting professionals and other viewers.
Effectiveness of the Summary
The summary is briefly capturing current professional status and further description on hobbies and interest individualizes the profile.
Experience and Achievements
Strong summary of experiences highlighting the work experience and achievements with performance skills learned through the experience. Enough details provided on accomplishments via performance.
Volunteer Experience
Volunteer experience included as part of the experience.
Education and Courses
Relevant education and courses listed.
Skills
Detailed list of skills related to professional career highlights the expertise.
Research suggests adding ‘skills’ right after profile summary for computer software developers.
Connections
Strong networking with an impressive number of connections.
Grammatical and Expression
Overall, the writing has a good flow with enough detail to each section and no major grammatical error. Just a minor suggestion under experience of co-founder:
It is best to write it in bullet forms to keep it consistent with other experiences.
Conclusion
I have enjoyed reviewing your profile. You have an excellent profile page showing strong networking skills and you seem to be on the right tray for your profile. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you have any questions.
Thank you
Priyanka
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