To: Eric Chang
From: Jason Smith
Subject: Peer Review LinkedIn Profile
Reviewer: Jason Smith
LinkedIn URL: https://www.linkedin.com/in/eric-chang-817b64195/
Date: Nov 3, 2019
Hi Eric,
Thanks for publishing your LinkedIn profile for review. Your profile looks great and very well presented. However, I do have some comments below for ways you could improve your site.
First Impressions
- I can immediately pick up that you are interested in mathematics and computer science and you have a dire interest for problem solving, however I cannot undermine any specific domain interest off of your profile
Profile Picture
- You do include a profile picture however it is seems like you took a photo of an existing photo instead of uploading the true original copy or scanning the photo. The glare makes it difficult to view.
Headline/Summary
- I cannot immediately determine the specific domain interest you want to work in. You specify roles in computer science or mathematics, however this field has developed so immensely that it is not clear what type of roles you are looking for.
Skills, Accomplishments, and Interests
- You pertain achievements in lifeguarding but there is nothing on your profile related to the career interests outlined in your summary. As you develop further in the field it might be worth it to remove irrelevant experience.
Grammar, Punctuation, and Writing Style
- The Linkedin summary is well written, allowing your skillset to be summarized in an orderly manner.
Overall Impression and Comments:
In conclusion, you have set up a LinkedIn profile with good experience and achievements, just nothing related to your field of interests. Overall, your writing is coherent and well described but the content is not related to the interests you specify.
LinkedIn Link: https://www.linkedin.com/in/eric-chang-817b64195/
Peer Review Template: 301_Jason_Smith_Peer_Review_Template
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