To: Jason Smith, Team 7 teammate
From: Erfan Ahmed, Team 7 teammate
Subject: Peer review-LinkedIn Profile
Hi Jason,
I have had the pleasure of visiting your LinkedIn profile, and have enjoyed reading through the different categories that you have elaborated on. I am impressed by the amount of prior work experience that you have achieved in addition to your current specialization in the computing science field. It is also evident that you have gained a great foundation for networking from the LinkedIn connections that you have in your profile. Below, you will find the following peer review of your LinkedIn Profile, along with additional feedback or recommendations to improve building your network or prospects for future employment.
Profile and Headline
- The headline is professional and summarizes the current (or most recent) work experience outlined in the profile.
- Very professional LinkedIn profile picture, and sets the tone for the rest of the profile
- The use of a custom URL allows easy access to your LinkedIn profile.
Profile Summary
- The profile summary provides a great introduction about your values and beliefs, and further outlines your goals to achieve future employment.
- It summarizes your current roles and work experience that elaborate your skill set.
- The summary also includes personal hobbies and interests, which employers typically tend to look for in profiles
Experience, Education, and Volunteer Experiences
- The profile outlines immense work experience for huge corporations.
- The profile could benefit from adding a brief description of the role for the most recent work experience attained
Skills, Accomplishments, and Interests
The profile has professional skills and endorsements outlined
Grammar, Punctuation, and Writing Style
- The Linkedin profile is very well written and brief, allowing your skillset to be summarized in a fashionably and orderly manner.
Overall Impression and Comments:
In conclusion, you have set up a fantastic LinkedIn profile that will guarantee for success for future opportunities. The addition to links and videos is a bonus, and creates a professional portfolio that outlines your skills and knowledge.
One suggestion for your LinkedIn profile would be to add a brief description of your role working at Apple and Tesla.
Overall, I was very pleased in viewing your LinkedIn profile, and I hope this is a start to connect with other professionals, and ultimately lead to a great future ahead of you. I have also sent you a LinkedIn invitation and look forward to connecting with you very soon.
LinkedIn Link: https://www.linkedin.com/in/jasonsmitha/
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