To: Tarandeep Atwal, ENGL301 Student
From: Priyanka Patel, ENGL301 Student
Date: December 15, 2019
Subject: Peer Review of Application Package Draft
Thank you for sharing your application package draft with the team. I enjoyed reading through the draft and it was captivating to see your enthusiasm throughout your writing in the application package. Please see my feedback on the Application Package Draft.
- Great idea to include job posting with details such as responsibilities and qualifications required
- Citation in MLA format is included
- Clearly identifies the purpose of writing with self identification
- Related experience and qualifications included
- Positively expresses enthusiasm and confidence while writing with YOU-attitude
- Personal interest related to the job is mentioned
- Career objective adjusted to the job requirement
- Well organized with bold and bullet points
- Relevant work and volunteer experience included in detail
- Personal information such as awards, and skills emphasized
- Well written and professionally communicated with YOU-attitude
- E-mail is brief and to the point
Application Package draft is professional and uses positive tone throughout the application. There is great amount of detail in cover letter, resume and reference letters to get the message across. Content is clear, easy to follow and information is organized through bold subheadings and bullet points where applicable.
There are no major grammar or spelling errors.
Overall, the application package is clear and written parallel to the guidelines of the assignment. I had a pleasure reviewing your assignment. Thank you and please contact me at firstname.lastname@example.org if you have any questions.