To: Erfan Ahmed
From: Eric Chang
Date: Nov 1, 2019
Subject: Peer Review of LinkedIn Profile
Hi Erfan Ahmed, I’ve had the pleasure of reading and reviewing your LinkedIn profile. Overall I am extremely impressed with your LinkedIn profile as your wide range of work experience really stands out. Below I have provided an overall review as well as a few suggestions for your profile.
Profile picture
Your profile picture is good as it is a close up picture of you which is what is suggested by LinkedIn when choosing a profile picture. With that being said I do think there are few slight changes that can be made to improve your profile picture. The first suggestion is to dress a bit more formally for the photo as it makes the overall picture look much more professional. My second suggestion would be to choose a photo of yourself either working or at your workplace as this will also make the photo look once again much more professional as well as let the viewers know what type of workplace you work in.
Headline
Headline is perfect as it provides the viewer with both your job title as well as the company that you are currently working at.
About
Your about section of your profile was detailed and provides a lot of information to your readers about the type of worker that you are as well as the strengths that you have gained from your work experience. My only suggestion is that to include some personal things about yourself in this section as this would make your about section seem more personal to the viewer.
Work Experience
Your work experience section of your profile was excellent and is one of the strongest sections of your profile. The work experience was organized as all of the events were ordered in chronological order. Your job title and company name were all stated clearly and you provided good details about the role that you played when working for the company.
Education
Education section was also well done as you provide information about both the highschool and the universities that you have attended.
Volunteer experiences
Your volunteer experience section was also excellent due to the fact that you have volunteered at multiple places. The volunteer experience was well organized as all of the events were ordered in chronological order. Your volunteer position and the name of the organization you volunteered at were all provided. You also did a good job at describing the role you played when volunteering at that organization.
Skills, Accomplishments, and Interest
Your skills, accomplishments, and interest section is good as all of the skills as well as accomplishments that you have listed are all endorsed by multiple people. The skills and accomplishments that you have stated within your profile also seem catered towards the job that you are looking for and this should make you an extremely strong applicant for future jobs.
Organization, structure, and grammar
Your profile is well organized and I did not see any grammar mistakes when reading over your profile.
Conclusion
Overall, your LinkedIn profile was extremely impressive and I am amazed at how many places you have both worked at or volunteered at. I have sent out a LinkedIn invitation to you and I look forward to connecting with you real soon.
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Erfan Ahmed’s LinkedIn profile: https://www.linkedin.com/in/erfan-ahmed/
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