To: Erfan Ahmed, ENGL 301 student
From: Eric Chang, ENGL 301 student
Date: Nov 25, 2019
Subject: Peer review of writing with you-attitude assignment
Hi Erfan,
Attached below you will find my peer review of the email you sent to Evan Crisp in regards to communicating in a professional manner on emails.
First impressions
Your memo to Evan Crisp was both organized and precise as you clearly stated both the strength and weaknesses of Evan’s email. You also demonstrated that you have a strong understanding of the you-attitude form of writing through the suggestions you gave to Evan.
Organization
Overall the email was structured nicely, with all of the suggestions stated separated by bullet points so it easy for the reader to distinguish each suggestions. The title section for the suggestions section was also a nice touch as it distinguishes that section from both the intro and concluding comments.
Introduction
Introduction was short and to the point as you were able to quickly explain who you were as well as the intention behind the email.
Suggestions
The suggestions that you recommended were extremely helpful as you were able to cover the majority of flaws that Evan has in his original email. You also did a good job at presenting example solutions to the suggestions that you made so that Evan could better understand what you are trying to convey.
Grammar and Spelling
There were no major or minor grammatical or spelling errors.
Conclusion comments
Overall your email memo to Evan was exceptionally well done as you highlighted the majority of flaws that were originally present in Evan’s email. I hope the suggestions I stated will be useful for you the next time you work on a similar assignment. If you have any questions or concerns please feel free to contact me at eric.c1997@hotmail.com.
Best wishes,
Eric Chang
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