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Mirrors

1. Choose an entry from mirrors_stories_of_almost_everyone– scroll around, find a title that intrigues you!

2. After you read it, what questions are you left with? What do you think it means?

3. Write a response, noting a short summary of what the topic explores, how you unerstood it, and connected it to other things in your life, or something it reminded you of.

4. Check over your work to make sure the topic sentence, supporting details from the text, and your critical, original thoughts are included.

Voila! You are done!

The Absolutely True Diary – Novel Study Assignment

ESSAY TOPICS for the ABSOLUTELY TRUE DIARY OF A PART-TIME INDIAN

Essay Topics absolutely true diary

or Q 1-5, 8 or 11 at the back of the novel.

 

**PLEASE NOTE THE HISTORICAL AND GEOGRAPHICAL USE OF THE WORD “INDIAN” IS ACCEPTABLE ONLY WHEN PEOPLE SELF-IDENTIFY  AS SUCH.

IN CANADA THE WORD HAS FALLEN OUT OF ACCEPTANCE IN FAVOUR OF A PERSON’S NATION, FIRST NATIONS, INUIT OR METIS; ABORIGINAL PEOPLE; AND INDIGENOUS PEOPLE AS REFERRING TO ABORIGINAL PEOPLE OF THE WORLD. “NATIVE” SHOULD BE USED WITH CAUTION AND RESPECT TO THE CONVERSATION.

YOU SHOULD ONLY REFER TO “INDIAN” AS IT IS USED IN A HISTORICAL CONTEXT, WITHIN THE BOOK’S TITLE, OR TO REFER TO THE AUTHOR’S PERSPECTIVE, WHICH IN AMERICA, HAS NOT ADJUSTED.**

Difference between Analysis and Summary

ANALYSIS vs. SUMMARY

*        Summarizing is restating what the author has said, where analyzing is saying why the author says it.

http://writingcenter.unc.edu/handouts/summary-using-it-wisely/

 

Summary:  A brief paragraph describing and informing three or more of the following elements:

  1. Who: those involved
  2. What: the event or topic being covered
  3. When: time, period, era, night or day
  4. Where: the location, distance, place
  5. Why: the cause or causes
  6. How: the process(es)

Report: An extended summary that delves deeper into more descriptions and details of the above elements

 

Example:  This is a summary of the play Hamlet.

 

“The play Hamlet is one of betrayal and death.  In the beginning of the play Hamlet’s uncle, Claudius kills Hamlet’s father with poison.  He does this because he wants to be king, and he wants Gertrude, Hamlet’s mother.  Hamlet is very upset.  He becomes even more upset when Claudius, his uncle and his mother, Gertrude, announce they are to be married.  Hamlet cannot believe that they would do this after such a short period of time.  Hamlet then decides to kill his uncle to get revenge.  However, Hamlet waits to do this.   In the meantime Hamlet’s girlfriend Ofelia goes crazy and drowns herself.  Hamlet is also haunted by his father’s ghost.  At the end of the play, Hamlet dies.”

Analysis: examines the summary elements described above in order to look for their meaning in the following contexts:

  1. Relationships, trends, patterns
  2. Roles of people, places, objects, situations
  3. Consequences or results of events, decisions and processes
  4. Causes and their effects
  5. Advantages and disadvantages/ gains and losses
  6. Strengths and weaknesses

Example: A Freudian analysis of the play.

“Hamlet explores betrayal and death caused by several levels of poison: physical, psychological and social.  All of these poisons are intertwined on a psychological level.  Hamlet was first affected by Claudius’s physical poison—the poison that he had poured into the King’s ear, killing him.  After Claudius killed the King social poison spread throughout the kingdom like a disease.  The rebels began to call Laertes Lord, disrupting Hamlet’s claim to the throne, ‘How cheerfully on the false trail they cry’ (IV, V, 87).  Hamlet’s suppressed desire, the Oedipus complex, for his mother led to his own psychological poisoning, ‘Go not to mine uncle’s bed’ (III, III, 153).  He was upset that he desired to kill his father, as his uncle did, in order to possess his mother.  Hamlet desired to seek revenge on those who had hurt him, which was caused by his id, ‘Here thou incestuous, murderous, damned Dane, Drink of this potion’ (V, II, 330-333).  However, Hamlet hesitated to kill his uncle because of his moral super ego, ‘How I stand then, That have a father killed, a mother stained, Excitements of my reason and my blood, And let all asleep’ (IV, IV, 56-59)?  These inner psychological conflicts prevented Hamlet from acting until it was too late, and death was already knocking on his door, ‘The potent poison quiet o’er-crows my spirit’ (V, II, 359).” 

 

 

Difference between Analysis and Summary

Posted by msandhu on November 10, 2011

Writing a summary or an analysis seems like the easiest assignments but they can be very confusing. Many students confuse and mix summary with an analysis. They sometimes know what a summary is but they also think of analysis as a summary. However, they are two different things. A summary is rewriting what the story is about, but putting it in your own words. An analysis is breaking down the reading into smaller parts and examining it. I have put together some of the common factors that each one of them include.

SUMMARY

Writing a summary is not only limited to English classes. There are many other courses that you can take and you might have to write a summary. A summary is a report of author’s viewpoint. A summary is rewriting what you have read in your own words. One can think of the summary as the short version of the original writing. You should tell the reader what were the main and important points of the writing. Your summary should include the thesis or the main argument of the paper. In the summary, you should not include your opinion or what you think the author is trying to imply by writing it. It should only focus on what the author has written. Summary should also not include any kind of evaluation by the reader. You should not write what you think are the author’s strong or weak arguments.

One of the other important information the summary should include is the name of the book or article, the author’s name and the publication information. The publication information is when that piece of writing was first published (Date or year) and where was it published? This information usually goes in the introductory paragraph which is also going to include the thesis statement of the writing you have read.

The summary should also be formal. You should not address the author by their first name; use only their last name of the author. It is typed and usually only one paragraph depending on what you are writing about. I have only listed some of the most common factors that need to be included in the summary. Your instructor could give you a different structure they want you to follow and other guidelines.

ANALYSIS

An analysis is breaking a large topic into smaller pieces to better understand the subject. In an analysis you are not telling the reader about the main viewpoints of the author or what the writing is about, it is examining the structure and the details of the writing. You break the story into smaller parts to understand it better. Many instructors do not want you to express your opinion about the subject discussed in the paper. You can only give your opinion on how well the author did to convince the reader.

The first paragraph should be the introductory paragraph and it should include the title, author’s name, and publication details. You can also give the reader some background information on the subject being discussed in the writing and then give the thesis statement of the paper. First paragraph can also have a short summary about the paper.

In your analysis paper, you should address what is the main argument that the author is making and how well do they support the argument. The other factor to address is how reliable are the sources, and the authority that the author cites to make their argument strong. An analysis paper can also include the strengths and weaknesses of the paper and how they affect the argument being made by the author. You should also examine the tools like statistics, examples or citing of an authority to analyze the author’s reasoning for writing the paper. The other points one could address in their analysis paper are does the author address the opposition’s view point and does he/she attempts to refute it. Many instructors do not want you to express your opinion about the subject discussed in the paper. You can only give your opinion on how well the author did to convince the reader.  However, depending on your class level and your instructor it might be different and you might be allowed to express your opinion on the subject matter and tell whether you agree or disagree with the author.

It is very easy for many students to confuse analysis with a summary. They both have few similarities in the introductory paragraph but overall they have different structures. Most of the analyses or summaries will include many of the factors that I have listed above but you should always ask your instructors about what structure and guidelines they want you to follow. The structure and the information you put in your summary or analysis might also differ because of your class.


Editor’s note: While what Mohanjit says here is an excellent guideline as to the difference between summary and analysis, as a teacher, I’d feel a bit remiss if I didn’t mention that even with such seemingly fundamental terms as “analysis” and “summary,” teachers often have different understanding of what words mean. So, be aware that in addition to this excellent overview, your instructor may be looking for something specific in your analysis as well.

http://writingcenter.cos.edu/2011/11/difference-between-analysis-and-summary/

Writing Resources

Investigations Written Report Sample Outline

How to Write an Essay – Overview

ESSAY 101 > Advanced Thesis ppt

Write a Literary Analysis – For Language Arts

First Draft – REFLECTION

revision_self_evaluation_checklist -pdf

RevisionChecklistforEssaysTipSheet -docx

Literary analysis essay guide

See Five Rings for Historical Analysis resources

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Tips for Writing A Film Review

Difference between a Summary and an Analysis

Gr8 & 9 mid term marks ready

Great news. I have read and marked most outstanding assignments for gr. 8 and 9 from report card last to date.

Quite a few people are missing submissions. Rather than put zero, I have neither counted missing assignments against, nor for, any accumulation, unless it is a major assignment. I will give an overview of which ones are the major assignments Monday.

Why did it take so long?

Originally, in December I was told I needed a) a new rubric specifically tailored to every assignment b) to decide upon and take only the last assignment produced by students close to the next report cards. Formative feedback was relied upon largely instead.

Since this time, I have been allowed to change strategy and use a writing for SS and LA rubric for most assignments, cutting down my creation of rubric time immensely. Last assignments in the term will instead be weighted more than those at the beginning. You can find all the rubrics here.

Because of these January adjustments, I am confident I will be able to continue to give you timely feedback for the remainder of the year.

Please note: I will only  be able to provide feedback on Google docs, in-person and on paper only until email suspension is lifted.

Most people have shown a delightful improvement, however, students missing submissions will see a significant drop because the assignments are worth more (being more labour-intensive)  and there are fewer of them this term, so far.  I will be making a round to individuals who are missing items and clarify questions so you may make up past work confidently.

Thanks for your patience!

Gr 7s – I expect to be done marks by Wed (perhaps earlier).

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Rubrics & Grading

SS SCORING GUIDE

SIX TRAITS WRITING RUBRIC

 

Response to Literary Journals

short_story_rubric

Classroom Discussion Rubric par1

Assessing a Choice

 

Group_Presentation_Marking_Rubric

Peer-Feedback-Form par edit 03 05 15

REFLECT – Individual reflection sheet

 

Re-adjudication / Re-evaluation

Students may request for a re-evaluation of any work by handing in a clean copy of a work stapled to the originally graded copy and original rubric. Please indicate on the cover that you wish to have a re-evaluation.

Dulce et Decorum Est

Dulce et Decorum Est

BY WILFRED OWEN

Bent double, like old beggars under sacks,
Knock-kneed, coughing like hags, we cursed through sludge,
Till on the haunting flares we turned our backs,
And towards our distant rest began to trudge.
Men marched asleep. Many had lost their boots,
But limped on, blood-shod. All went lame; all blind;
Drunk with fatigue; deaf even to the hoots
Of gas-shells dropping softly behind.
Gas! GAS! Quick, boys!—An ecstasy of fumbling
Fitting the clumsy helmets just in time,
But someone still was yelling out and stumbling
And flound’ring like a man in fire or lime.—
Dim through the misty panes and thick green light,
As under a green sea, I saw him drowning.
In all my dreams before my helpless sight,
He plunges at me, guttering, choking, drowning.
If in some smothering dreams, you too could pace
Behind the wagon that we flung him in,
And watch the white eyes writhing in his face,
His hanging face, like a devil’s sick of sin;
If you could hear, at every jolt, the blood
Come gargling from the froth-corrupted lungs,
Obscene as cancer, bitter as the cud
Of vile, incurable sores on innocent tongues,—
My friend, you would not tell with such high zest
To children ardent for some desperate glory,
The old Lie: Dulce et decorum est
Pro patria mori.

NOTES: Latin phrase is from the Roman poet Horace: “It is sweet and fitting to die for one’s country.”

 

Source: Poems (Viking Press, 1921)

Todesfuge (Death Fuge)

Todesfuge (Death Fuge)

Paul Celan1930 – 1970
Trans. Joachim Neugroschl

Black milk of dawn we drink it at dusk
we drink it at noon and at daybreak we drink it at night
we drink and we drink
we are digging a grave in the air there’s room for us all
A man lives in the house he plays with the serpents he writes
he writes when it darkens to Germany your golden hair Margarete
he writes it and steps outside and the stars all agisten he whistles for his hounds
he whistles for his Jews he has them dig a grave in the earth
he commands us to play for the dance

Black milk of dawn we drink you at night
we drink you at daybreak and noon we drink you at dusk
we drink and we drink
A man lives in the house he plays with the serpents he writes
he writes when it darkens to Germany your golden hair Margarete
Your ashen hair Shulamite we are digging a grave in the air there’s room for us all

He shouts cut deeper in the earth to some the rest of you sing and play
he reaches for the iron in his belt he heaves it his eyes are blue
make your spades cut deeper the rest of you play for the dance

Black milk of dawn we drink you at night
we drink you at noon and at daybreak we drink you at dusk
we drink and we drink
a man lives in the house your golden hair Margarete
your ashen hair Shulamite he plays with the serpents

He shouts play death more sweetly death is a master from Germany
he shouts play the violins darker you’ll rise as smoke in the air
then you’ll have a grave in the clouds there’s room for you all

Black milk of dawn we drink you at night
we drink you at noon death is a master from Germany
we drink you at dusk and at daybreak we drink and we drink you
death is a master from Germany his eye is blue
he shoots you with bullets of lead his aim is true
a man lives in the house your golden hair Margarete
he sets his hounds on us he gives us a grave in the air
he plays with the serpents and dreams death is a master from Germany
your golden hair Margarete
your ashen hair Shulamite

 


anselm kiefer's “your golden hair, margarete”


The Cage

Critical Questions and Reflections on the Cage.

Guidelines:

  • Please include email a short book review after you are finished reading the book
  • You may choose one or several questions to answer in a media format.
  • Preference is for formal paragraphs or academic essay format.
  • Please email Ms. Ruck for alternative format proposals.

1. Discuss the importance of community in Lods, Poland, and what community meant for Riva and her family.

2. Discuss the purpose of the ghettos established by the Third Reich and the conditions suffered by Jews in the ghettos. How does Riva’s narrative help to inform the reader about these ghettos?

3. Examine how Rita was treated in comparison to others and conclude why she was given second chances on many occasions. Discuss how this impacted her emotionally.

4.Analyze the significance of the statement that the bombs were “music”.

5. Examine the role that writing had in Riva’s life.

6. Discuss the types of punishment used in concentration and labour camps during the Holocaust and determine the purpose of the punishment. Analyze whether the punishment fits the “crime”.

7. Examine the meaning of the statement “if we forget the past, it could happen again”.

8. Discuss Sender’s use of foreshadowing and other literary devices in the Cage.

 

As long as there is life, there is hope

After Mama is taken away by the Nazis, Riva and her younger brothers cling to their mother’s brave words to help them endure life in the Lodz ghetto. Then the family is rounded up, deported to Auschwitz, and separated. Now Riva is alone. 

At Auschwitz, and later in the work camps at Mittlesteine and Grafenort, Riva vows to live, and to hope – for Mama, for her brothers, for the millions of other victims of the nightmare of the Holocaust. And through determination and courage, and unexpected small acts of kindness, she does live – to write the unforgettable memoir that is a testament to the strength of the human spirit.