Peer Review of Writing with You Attitude

To: Tarandeep Atwal, ENGL301 Student

From: Priyanka Patel, ENGL301 Student

Date: November 23, 2019

Subject: Peer Review of Writing with You Attitude

Please see my feedback on your email to Evan Crisp on best practices for emailing professors.

First Impressions:

Your email to Evan Crisp is professional and uses friendly tone to provide useful guidelines for effective communication through email with the professor. Feedback provided clearly demonstrates your understanding on the you attitude and reader-centered writing.

Organization: 

The email memorandum is clear, easy to follow and information is organized through bold subheadings. There is a great amount of detail for reader to learn and understand.

Introduction:

Introduction is short and to the point.

Suggestions:

The assignment is missing a title “Memorandum” at the top.

Grammar/ Spelling: 

There are not major grammar or spelling errors.

Concluding comments:

Overall, the memo is clear and written parallel to the guidelines of the assignment. Writing tips provided in your email will help Evan Crisp strengthen communication with professors. My only suggestion is to add a title at the top of the assignment.

I had a pleasure reviewing your assignment. Thank you and please contact me if you have any questions.

Link to Tarandeep’s assignment