Peer Review of Zachary’s Application Package

Please head see a Peer Review for Sydney Dunn’s application at the following link: 

https://blogs.ubc.ca/engl301-98a-2020sa/2020/08/17/peer-review-of-sydneys-web-application-package/

Zachary’s peer review will be completed upon uploading of his Web Application package to the GlamFam Forum.

Peer Review

To:                                     Zachary Goldman, English 301 Student

From:                                Meera Patel, English 301 Student

Date:                                 August 15, 2020

Subject:                           Peer Review of Web Application Package

Hello Zachary,

This peer review will be completed upon posting of your Web Application Package according to the sections below.

First Impression:

Job Description:

Cover Letter:

• Design:
• Content:
• Grammar / Typos:
• Style / tone:
• What are the strengths of this Cover Letter?
• What is an area or suggestion for improvement?

Resume:

• Design:
• Content:
• Grammar / Typos:
• Most impactful area of the resume?
• What kind of section can be added to improve this resume for the employer?

Letters of Reference:

• Design:
• Content:
• Grammar / Typos:
• Style / tone:

• • Is the content of Letter #1 effective? In what way? How can it be improved?:
  • Is the content of Letter #2 effective? In what way? How can it be improved?:
  • Is the content of Letter #3 effective? In what way? How can it be improved?:

Concluding Statements: