Date: 09 July 2020
Peer Reviewer: Luke Jang
Author: Hangwei Bao
Linkedin URL: https://www.linkedin.com/in/hangwei-bao-bb71101b2/
Thank you for submitting your Linkedin profile. Overall, the profile seems to be short, you do have most of the sections filled out.
Initial impression
The profile seems to be very short at first and I do notice that a lot of the components required are not filled out. However, I like the fact that you have your profile picture and the background photo set up. Also, your #opentowork link gives an impression that you are willing to work and currently looking for a job.
Headline
The headline accurately describes your current state in terms of employment.
Profile Photo
You have a good quality profile photo set up. The hashtag that is on the side of your profile photo makes it look nicer and appeals that you are open to an opportunity.
Summary/About
This section is missing. You need to fill out this section as an introduction for yourself.
Experiences
If you have any other experiences in the past, you can certainly put more details here. Being a student at UBC would not count as an experience.
Education
You do not have an Education section. Move your UBC student status from the ‘experience’ section to an ‘education’ section.
Skills and Endorsement
You currently do not have a section for ‘Skills and Endorsement’. You should think about any skills that might have and put it under a ‘Skills and Endorsement’ section.
Accomplishment
You currently do not have an ‘Accomplishment’ section. Make one and put down any courses that you have taken before. You can even put languages that you speak.
Overall Impressions
There are lots of parts missing on your profile. Please refer to the list summary below and address.
-Summary/About missing
-Put down more experiences (if any)
-Education section missing
-Skills and Endorsement section missing
-Accomplishment section missing
I hope you find my suggestions helpful in improving your Linkedin profile. If there are any questions present, please do let me know.
Thank you.
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