Evan Crisp Memo Peer Review for Christina

To: Christina Hruby, Scribe Writing Team Member

From: Max Foran, Scribe Writing Team Member

Date: July 23, 2020

Subject: Peer Review for Evan Crisp Memo

First Impressions:

At first glance, the document is clear, easy to read, and well-structured. The advice given is useful and provides specific examples where the writer can improve.

Organization:

• The document is well-organized with bullet points.
• Each bullet point contains a unique point with a clear explanation.
• A brief introduction discussing some of the reasons for the memo might serve well to “set the stage”.

Writing Style & Expression:

• Strong use of the “YOU-attitude”
• The language is professional yet friendly. There are no condescending remarks.
• An elaboration on the merits for each bullet point might improve the credibility. For example, “focusing on the reader is a good writing technique because…”.

Grammar & Spelling

• There are no grammar or spelling mistakes.

Concluding Comments:

This is a strong memo for Evan Crisp. It is clear and to the point. A minor addition of detail for each point could be helpful for the reader. Nevertheless, well done.

Christina Hruby’s Memo